Question

Patrick lived in Emoryville, but every Saturday morning he rode two city buses to his uncle’s bookstore in Northview where he worked. He didn’t mind the commute because he loved his job. He loved spending time with his uncle, but he also loved going to work because he had become friends with Andrew, one of his co-workers. The boys would talk about everything from baseball scores to movies to favorite pizza toppings. So this Saturday, when Patrick got to work, he and Andrew got to talking as they always did. “Hey, Pat,” Andrew said casually. “Hey,” said Patrick. “Did you have a good week?” “Yeah,” he said. “Great week. My basketball team made it into the semifinals. The game is tonight. We’re playing Emoryville, our nemesis.” Before Patrick could say another word, Andrew continued. “I don’t like Emoryville. I don’t think I could ever be friends with someone from that town. Our schools are such rivals.” Patrick was speechless. “Where are you from, Pat? I can’t believe I’ve never asked you that before!” Patrick fumbled over his words. “Not too far from here,” he said before he quickly changed the subject to the new shipment of graphic novels. Write a paragraph explaining the structure of the story and how the structure contributes to the meaning of the story.

Answer 1

The story employs a straightforward narrative structure that unfolds through a series of interactions and dialogues between Patrick and Andrew in a typical weekend setting. This linear progression establishes a familiar routine, highlighting the comfort and camaraderie that Patrick finds in his job and friendships. The initial setup introduces a casual yet meaningful conversation that quickly transitions into tension when Andrew reveals his strong animosity towards Emoryville, Patrick's hometown. This moment of conflict serves to deepen the narrative, as Patrick's hesitation and change of subject suggest an internal struggle and a sense of loyalty to his roots. The structure effectively contrasts the light-hearted beginnings of their conversation with the abrupt complexity introduced by Andrew's prejudice, thereby emphasizing themes of rivalry, identity, and friendship. The story ultimately invites readers to reflect on how hometown loyalties can complicate relationships and create divisions, even among friends.