Question
Google Cardboard
(1) Google Cardboard is an inexpensive virtual reality device made of cardboard that can be controlled by a smartphone. (2) Virtual reality can transport people to a completely different world. (3) A user can be in the ocean swimming with fish one moment and the next watch a huge volcano erupt. (4) The possibilities offered by virtual reality are almost endless, but the tools needed are usually expensive. (5) That is where Google Cardboard comes in.
(6) Google Cardboard is an amazing innovative virtual reality device and an affordable one. (7) Most virtual reality devices can cost up to six hundred dollars. (8) Google Cardboard costs only twenty-two dollars and works with all smartphones. (9) A computer is not necessary to be able to use it—only a smartphone—which makes it convenient due to almost everyone owning a smartphone.
(10) Lastly, this device has a very easy setup, all that is needed is the free cardboard app. (11) The user scans a code to allow the app to know what model of headset is being used. (12) There are a variety of apps to use including game apps that allow users to watch television shows and movies. (13) Also on YouTube there is a way to watch 360˚ view videos on a smartphone. (14) The exciting and innovative world of virtual reality can now be experienced by almost everyone.
Question
Which is the correct way to edit sentence 3?
Responses
A user can be in the ocean swimming with fish one moment, and the next watch a huge volcano erupt.
A user can be in the ocean swimming with fish one moment, and the next watch a huge volcano erupt.
A user can be in the ocean swimming with fish, one moment and the next watch a huge volcano erupt.
A user can be in the ocean swimming with fish, one moment and the next watch a huge volcano erupt.
A user can be in the ocean swimming with fish one moment and the next watched a huge volcano erupt.
A user can be in the ocean swimming with fish one moment and the next watched a huge volcano erupt.
A user can be in the ocean swimming with fish one moment and the next watching a huge volcano erupt.
A user can be in the ocean swimming with fish one moment and the next watching a huge volcano erupt.
(1) Google Cardboard is an inexpensive virtual reality device made of cardboard that can be controlled by a smartphone. (2) Virtual reality can transport people to a completely different world. (3) A user can be in the ocean swimming with fish one moment and the next watch a huge volcano erupt. (4) The possibilities offered by virtual reality are almost endless, but the tools needed are usually expensive. (5) That is where Google Cardboard comes in.
(6) Google Cardboard is an amazing innovative virtual reality device and an affordable one. (7) Most virtual reality devices can cost up to six hundred dollars. (8) Google Cardboard costs only twenty-two dollars and works with all smartphones. (9) A computer is not necessary to be able to use it—only a smartphone—which makes it convenient due to almost everyone owning a smartphone.
(10) Lastly, this device has a very easy setup, all that is needed is the free cardboard app. (11) The user scans a code to allow the app to know what model of headset is being used. (12) There are a variety of apps to use including game apps that allow users to watch television shows and movies. (13) Also on YouTube there is a way to watch 360˚ view videos on a smartphone. (14) The exciting and innovative world of virtual reality can now be experienced by almost everyone.
Question
Which is the correct way to edit sentence 3?
Responses
A user can be in the ocean swimming with fish one moment, and the next watch a huge volcano erupt.
A user can be in the ocean swimming with fish one moment, and the next watch a huge volcano erupt.
A user can be in the ocean swimming with fish, one moment and the next watch a huge volcano erupt.
A user can be in the ocean swimming with fish, one moment and the next watch a huge volcano erupt.
A user can be in the ocean swimming with fish one moment and the next watched a huge volcano erupt.
A user can be in the ocean swimming with fish one moment and the next watched a huge volcano erupt.
A user can be in the ocean swimming with fish one moment and the next watching a huge volcano erupt.
A user can be in the ocean swimming with fish one moment and the next watching a huge volcano erupt.
Answers
GPT-4o mini
The correct way to edit sentence 3 is:
**A user can be in the ocean swimming with fish one moment and the next watching a huge volcano erupt.**
This option maintains proper parallel structure and verb tense.
**A user can be in the ocean swimming with fish one moment and the next watching a huge volcano erupt.**
This option maintains proper parallel structure and verb tense.