Use the excerpt from Peter Pan to answer the question.

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Mrs. Darling came to the window, for at present she was keeping a sharp eye on Wendy. She told Peter that she had adopted all the other boys, and would like to adopt him also.

“Would you send me to school?” he inquired craftily.

"Yes.”

“And then to an office?”

"I suppose so.”

“Soon I would be a man?”

“Very soon.”

“I don’t want to go to school and learn solemn things,” he told her passionately. “I don’t want to be a man. O Wendy’s mother, if I was to wake up and feel there was a beard!”

“Peter,” said Wendy the comforter, “I should love you in a beard;” and Mrs. Darling stretched out her arms to him, but he repulsed her. “Keep back, lady, no one is going to catch me and make me a man.”

“But where are you going to live?”

“With Tink in the house we built for Wendy. The fairies are to put it high up among the treetops where they sleep at nights.”

“How lovely,” cried Wendy so longingly that Mrs. Darling tightened her grip.

“I thought all the fairies were dead,” Mrs. Darling said.

"There are always a lot of young ones,” explained Wendy, who was now quite an authority, “because you see when a new baby laughs for the first time a new fairy is born, and as there are always new babies there are always new fairies. They live in nests on the tops of trees; and the mauve ones are boys and the white ones are girls, and the blue ones are just little sillies who are not sure what they are.”

“I shall have such fun,” said Peter, with one eye on Wendy.

“It will be rather lonely in the evening,” she said, “sitting by the fire.”

“I shall have Tink.”

In one to two sentences, determine how Wendy's point of view changes as the dialogue continues.

Check for any grammical errors and any other stuff, do not change into your words please. list all errors please.

At first, Wendy wants to adopt peter and is happy about the idea of peter living in a house until she realizes that it will be lonely for her in the evenings. As the dialogue continues Wendy is more aware that peter does not want to grow up.

Answer 1

Here are the grammatical errors and other issues found in your response:

1. Sentence Structure: The first sentence is a run-on. It could be split into two sentences for clarity.

   • Suggested revision: "At first, Wendy wants to adopt Peter and is happy about the idea of Peter living in a house. However, she realizes that it will be lonely for her in the evenings."

2. Capitalization: "peter" should be capitalized as "Peter" to maintain proper noun capitalization.

3. Punctuation: A comma could be added before "and is happy" for better flow.

4. Clarity: The phrase "until she realizes that it will be lonely for her in the evenings" could be worded more clearly with the addition of "but" at the beginning of the second clause.

5. Tense Consistency: In "As the dialogue continues Wendy is more aware," a comma is needed after "continues."

Corrected version with adjustments: "At first, Wendy wants to adopt Peter and is happy about the idea of Peter living in a house, but she realizes that it will be lonely for her in the evenings. As the dialogue continues, Wendy is more aware that Peter does not want to grow up."