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"Let’s read this part here. Also, quick question. Who’s the top in this?"
"What." Roman blinked, his fingers frozen over the keyboard.
I bit back a grin. "Kidding. Mostly."
Roman blinked again, slower this time, like his brain had just glitched. "You’re impossible," he muttered, but there was the faintest upward pull at the corner of his mouth.
"Just trying to lighten the mood."
He shook his head, but it was soft, not annoyed. "You’re terrible."
"Bold of you to assume I care," I said with a smirk, then tapped the table beside his laptop. "Come on, show me what’s tripping you up."
He didn’t move. Not right away. He just stared at the screen, like the glowing words had turned into something dangerous. I could feel it—the hesitation, the anxiety clinging to him like fog. Roman wasn't just nervous. He was scared.
Still, he scrolled slowly until he stopped on a paragraph. "It’s this part. I know what I want it to be, but every time I try, it just…"
He gestured vaguely, his hand falling to the side of the laptop. "It feels wrong."
"Let me read. I promise I won’t rip it apart."
Roman gave me a skeptical glance but shifted the laptop so I could see better. I leaned in, eyes skimming the words.
It was good.
No, actually, it was more than good.
It was raw and honest and vulnerable in a way that made my chest ache. The way he wrote the characters’ silence, the quiet things they didn’t say, felt more powerful than if he’d written a full monologue.
I didn’t realize I was staring until Roman shifted uncomfortably.
"You're staring."
"Because it’s amazing."
His brow furrowed. "It’s not."
"Yes, it is," I said, tapping the screen gently. "This part right here? It’s beautiful."
Roman looked away. "You're just saying that."
"No, I'm really not. I wouldn't lie to you about something like this."
He looked back down at the screen, chewing the inside of his cheek, like he was still trying to convince himself I wasn't messing with him. Like someone had planted a different voice in his head, and it was louder than mine.
I watched him for a moment, then leaned back slightly.
"You know, maybe you’re stuck because you’re too in your head. You’re thinking about what people might say instead of what you want to say."
Roman exhaled, quiet. "That’s kind of the problem."
"Then let’s fix it together."
He blinked. "What?"
"Let’s work on it together. Just this chapter. I can help you brainstorm, you write."
He hesitated. "I don’t know..."
"I promise not to suggest anything completely unhinged."
"Like accidental public confessions?"
"That was one time."
Roman’s lips twitched. Then, after a pause, he nodded slowly. "Okay."
He opened the doc again. We sat shoulder to shoulder, the afternoon light pouring in from the windows, casting a soft glow across the table.
"What if," I started, pointing at a sentence, "instead of him confessing outright, he leaves something behind—like a book, or a letter—and the other guy finds it?"
Roman looked at me. For once, his eyes weren’t guarded. They were curious. Hopeful.
"That… could work," he said slowly. "Actually, yeah. That fits better with the pacing."
He started typing, slowly at first, then faster. I stayed quiet, watching the words appear on the screen.
Minutes passed. Maybe more.
Finally, Roman stopped and leaned back. He stared at the screen, then glanced at me.
"I think I just finished it," he whispered.
I smiled. "Chapter eleven?"
He nodded. "It’s done."
I reached out without thinking, placing my hand gently on his shoulder.
"Roman," I said, meeting his eyes, "that’s amazing. Seriously. You did it."
His eyes widened slightly. The smallest spark lit up in them—relief, maybe. Or something softer. Brighter.
And then—for the first time in what felt like forever—Roman smiled. Not a twitch. Not a smirk. A real smile.
"Thanks," he said quietly. "For helping me. For… not making fun of it. Or me."
I squeezed his shoulder gently. "Of course. Always."
He looked down, then back at me. "It meant a lot. I didn’t think I could finish it. But you made it feel possible again."
"You made it possible," I corrected. "I just reminded you it was worth doing."
Roman chuckled under his breath, eyes crinkling at the corners. He turned back to the screen and saved the file.
"So," I said, still smiling, "what now?"
He looked at me. "Now we keep going. Chapter twelve."
I leaned back, nodding. "I’m all in."
Roman grinned again, brighter this time. And just like that, the heaviness that had weighed him down for days seemed to lift—not completely, but enough.
Enough to keep going.
And maybe, just maybe, enough to let me in a little more next time.
The sun dipped lower, the shadows in the café stretching across the floor. Roman closed his laptop, his smile still soft, still real.
We sat in silence for a while, sipping water, letting the quiet comfort settle around us.
Sometimes healing doesn’t look like loud declarations or grand apologies. Sometimes it’s just one chapter.
One page.
One person who believes in you.
And if Roman let me, I’d be that person again and again.
Because seeing him smile like that?
That was worth everything.


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"Let’s read this part here. Also, quick question. Who’s the top in this?"
"What." Roman blinked, his fingers frozen over the keyboard.
I bit back a grin. "Kidding. Mostly."
Roman blinked again, slower this time, like his brain had just glitched. "You’re impossible," he muttered, but there was the faintest upward pull at the corner of his mouth.
"Just trying to lighten the mood."
He shook his head, but it was soft, not annoyed. "You’re terrible."
"Bold of you to assume I care," I said with a smirk, then tapped the table beside his laptop. "Come on, show me what’s tripping you up."

He didn’t move. Not right away. He just stared at the screen, like the glowing words had turned into something dangerous. I could feel it—the hesitation, the anxiety clinging to him like fog. Roman wasn't just nervous. He was scared.
Still, he scrolled slowly until he stopped on a paragraph. "It’s this part. I know what I want it to be, but every time I try, it just…"
He gestured vaguely, his hand falling to the side of the laptop. "It feels wrong."
"Let me read. I promise I won’t rip it apart."
Roman gave me a skeptical glance but shifted the laptop so I could see better. I leaned in, eyes skimming the words.

It was good.
No, actually, it was more than good.
It was raw and honest and vulnerable in a way that made my chest ache. The way he wrote the characters’ silence, the quiet things they didn’t say, felt more powerful than if he’d written a full monologue.

I didn’t realize I was staring until Roman shifted uncomfortably.
"You're staring."
"Because it’s amazing."
His brow furrowed. "It’s not."
"Yes, it is," I said, tapping the screen gently. "This part right here? It’s beautiful."
Roman looked away. "You're just saying that."
"No, I'm really not. I wouldn't lie to you about something like this."

He looked back down at the screen, chewing the inside of his cheek, like he was still trying to convince himself I wasn't messing with him. Like someone had planted a different voice in his head, and it was louder than mine.
I watched him for a moment, then leaned back slightly.
"You know, maybe you’re stuck because you’re too in your head. You’re thinking about what people might say instead of what you want to say."
Roman exhaled, quiet. "That’s kind of the problem."
"Then let’s fix it together."
He blinked. "What?"
"Let’s work on it together. Just this chapter. I can help you brainstorm, you write."
He hesitated. "I don’t know…"
"I promise not to suggest anything completely unhinged."
"Like accidental public confessions?"
"That was one time."

Roman’s lips twitched. Then, after a pause, he nodded slowly. "Okay."
He opened the doc again. We sat shoulder to shoulder, the afternoon light pouring in from the windows, casting a soft glow across the table.
"What if," I started, pointing at a sentence, "instead of him confessing outright, he leaves something behind—like a book, or a letter—and the other guy finds it?"

Roman looked at me. For once, his eyes weren’t guarded. They were curious. Hopeful.
"That… could work," he said slowly. "Actually, yeah. That fits better with the pacing."
He started typing, slowly at first, then faster. I stayed quiet, watching the words appear on the screen.

Minutes passed. Maybe more.
Finally, Roman stopped and leaned back. He stared at the screen, then glanced at me.
"I think I just finished it," he whispered.
I smiled. "Chapter eleven?"
He nodded. "It’s done."
I reached out without thinking, placing my hand gently on his shoulder.
"Roman," I said, meeting his eyes, "that’s amazing. Seriously. You did it."

His eyes widened slightly. The smallest spark lit up in them—relief, maybe. Or something softer. Brighter.
And then—for the first time in what felt like forever—Roman smiled. Not a twitch. Not a smirk. A real smile.
"Thanks," he said quietly. "For helping me. For… not making fun of it. Or me."
I squeezed his shoulder gently. "Of course. Always."

He looked down, then back at me. "It meant a lot. I didn’t think I could finish it. But you made it feel possible again."
"You made it possible," I corrected. "I just reminded you it was worth doing."
Roman chuckled under his breath, eyes crinkling at the corners. He turned back to the screen and saved the file.
"So," I said, still smiling, "what now?"
He looked at me. "Now we keep going. Chapter twelve."
I leaned back, nodding. "I’m all in."

Roman grinned again, brighter this time. And just like that, the heaviness that had weighed him down for days seemed to lift—not completely, but enough.
Enough to keep going.
And maybe, just maybe, enough to let me in a little more next time.

The sun dipped lower, the shadows in the café stretching across the floor. Roman closed his laptop, his smile still soft, still real.
We sat in silence for a while, sipping water, letting the quiet comfort settle around us. The hum of the café, a distant melody of clinking cups and low conversations, became a backdrop, a comforting soundtrack to our developing friendship.

As I sat there, I couldn’t help but think about how even in this small moment, we both seemed to bloom, to grow. “You know,” I said slowly, breaking the peaceful silence, “you have a real gift here. Writing can really change things.”

Roman raised an eyebrow, a mix of self-deprecation and curiosity. “Really? You think so?”
I leaned forward, my elbows on the table. “Absolutely. The way you capture emotions—it pulls people in. This story—your story—could resonate with so many.”

He shook his head, a slight flush creeping up his cheeks. "I don't know about that. It feels so... personal."
"That's exactly what makes it powerful. The best stories often come from the author's heart, their raw experiences. It's relatable."

He paused, a thoughtful look crossing his face. "I guess. But isn’t that scary? Putting yourself out there like that?"
I nodded, understanding the weight of vulnerability. “It is. But it’s also freeing. Kind of like when you breathe in the cool air after being underwater for too long. Once you let it out, you realize you can float.”

Roman met my gaze, and for a moment, the world around us dimmed. I saw the flicker of hope igniting in his eyes, the realization that perhaps he could transcend his self-doubt. “I’ve never thought about it like that.”
“Then maybe it’s time to change that.” I leaned back in my chair, crossing my arms. "So, chapter twelve...”.

We spent the next few hours lost in the warmth of ideas, brainstorming, laughing, and coaxing the words from Roman’s mind onto the page. Each suggestion he took seemed to bring him closer out of the fog he’d been stuck in—a fog that I realized I wanted to help him navigate.

As the shadows of the café lengthened, the atmosphere shifted. There was a new energy, an unspoken connection forming between us. I found myself wanting to dive deeper, to share more than just our writing.
“What if this story isn’t just about you and your characters?” I said curiously, trying to read between the lines of his narrative.

Roman leaned forward, intrigued. “What do you mean?”
“Maybe it reflects parts of you. Your experiences, fears, hopes. Just like it captures the nuances of relationships.”
He considered my words, his fingers drumming lightly against the table. “It’s hard to tell. Sometimes, I feel like I’m just piecing together fragments of myself.”

“Exactly.” I smiled encouragingly. “But those fragments make a whole. The beauty lies in the chaos. You don’t have to have it all figured out to write. That’s the point.”

Our conversation flowed easily, revealing parts of our personalities shaped by experiences, past pains, and ambitions that bound us in unexpected ways. I learned that writing was not just an outlet for Roman; it was more like a mirror reflecting his innermost being, a chance for him to shape his identity and gain clarity.

Eventually, we drew back from our deep discussion, the air lighter yet more substantial, tinged with a sweetness of understanding.
“Thanks for pushing me,” he murmured, his voice so soft I almost missed it. “It’s nice to know someone believes in me.”

“Always,” I echoed, my heart swelling. “And I will keep believing. Through the chapters… and beyond.”
The sun dipped ever lower, painting the walls around us with a palette of oranges and pinks, illuminating Roman’s features in a way that made him look almost ethereal.

We stayed for a while longer, basking in the afterglow of effort and connection, two souls intertwined in creativity, comfort, and camaraderie. The café began to empty, the clinking of cups becoming less frequent, but I felt we had created a world entirely our own.

And then, with a determined smile, Roman broke through my thoughts. “I think I want to write a story about us next.”
I raised an eyebrow in playful disbelief, a laugh escaping my lips. “What’s that supposed to look like?”
He grinned wider, the mischief shining in his eyes. “Adventures, maybe? Friendship turning into something more?”
I felt my heart skip a beat, warmth spreading across my cheeks. "Well, if you need inspiration..."

He cut me off, a teasing look playing on his face. "Don't get ahead of yourself."
But his eyes sparkled, igniting something unspoken between us. Something that hinted at the promise of pages yet to be written, chapters yet to unfold, filled with not just words but the emotions that would guide them.

In that moment, as we both sat contemplating the next chapters of our stories—his fictional and mine emotional—I felt an overwhelming sense of gratitude that I could be a part of this journey. Because seeing him smile like that?
That was worth everything.

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