Is my grammar correct:

Reed wanted to do some remodeling of his home, but instead of using hammer and nails exclusively to do the remodeling, he decides to “purchased a DIY SN325 nail gun directly from the manufacturer.”

1 answer

Your sentence has a few grammatical issues. Here's a corrected version:

"Reed wanted to remodel his home, but instead of using hammer and nails exclusively, he decided to purchase a DIY SN325 nail gun directly from the manufacturer."

Here are the specific changes made:

  1. Changed "do some remodeling of his home" to "remodel his home" for conciseness.
  2. Removed "to do the remodeling" after "exclusively" as it's implied.
  3. Changed "decides" to "decided" to keep the tense consistent.
  4. Changed "purchased" to "purchase" for consistency in tense.

Let me know if you need further assistance!