Marcus writes the following sentence in an opinion paragraph about The Neighborhood Cafe: At the restaurant, my favorite thing on the menu is the dessert.
How could Marcus revise the sentence to express his opinion more clearly?
(1 point)
Responses
At the Neighborhood Cafe, my favorite thing on the menu is the warm, homemade apple pie.
At the Neighborhood Cafe, my favorite thing on the menu is the warm, homemade apple pie.
At the restaurant, my favorite thing on the menu is the warm, homemade apple pie.
At the restaurant, my favorite thing on the menu is the warm, homemade apple pie.
At The Neighborhood Cafe, my favorite thing on the menu is the pie.
At The Neighborhood Cafe, my favorite thing on the menu is the pie.
At the restaurant down the street, my favorite thing on the menu is the delicious dessert.
At the restaurant down the street, my favorite thing on the menu is the delicious dessert.
1 answer
The best revision for Marcus to express his opinion more clearly is:
At the Neighborhood Cafe, my favorite thing on the menu is the warm, homemade apple pie.
This sentence provides a specific detail about the dessert, making the opinion stronger and more vivid.
