Sure! Here are your notes and responses based on the stories "Amy's Metaphor" and "From Scratch."
Amy’s Metaphor by Elisa Oh
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Amy’s Assignment: Amy's assignment is to write a metaphor that reflects her feelings and identity. She struggles to complete the second part because she finds it challenging to accurately express her feelings about herself and her experiences.
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Plot Organization and Point of View: The events of "Amy’s Metaphor" are organized chronologically, following Amy’s thought process and emotional journey. The story is written in the first person, allowing readers to closely experience Amy’s internal struggles.
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Amy’s Upset and Personal Change: Amy is upset about her feelings of inadequacy and not fitting in. By the end of the story, her view of herself changes as she begins to accept her uniqueness. Evidence shows that she realizes that her experiences contribute to her identity, leading to a more positive self-image.
From Scratch by Susie Castellano
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Priya’s Sadness and Relationship Change: Priya feels sad in the kitchen because it reminds her of her mother, who has passed away. Throughout the story, her relationship with her mother evolves from mourning to cherishing her mother's memory, as she learns to cook her mother’s recipes and connect with her through food.
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Plot Structure and Point of View: The events of "From Scratch" are structured with flashbacks that intertwine Priya’s present cooking experience with memories of her mother. The story is told from a third-person limited point of view, focusing on Priya's thoughts and feelings.
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Priya’s Perspective Change: By the end of the story, Priya's perspective changes as she transitions from sadness to finding joy and comfort in cooking, which helps her feel closer to her mother. Evidence shows that she embraces cooking as a way to remember her mother, rather than just a reminder of her loss.
Compare/Contrast Both Stories
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Mixing Present and Past Events: Both stories blend present and past events by using flashbacks or reflections that provide insight into the characters’ emotional states. Amy reflects on her past experiences while writing her metaphor, and Priya’s memories of her mother surface as she cooks.
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Struggles with Identity and Emotions: Amy and Priya's struggles with identity and emotions profoundly shape their experiences. Amy's insecurities challenge her self-acceptance, while Priya’s grief affects her connection to her heritage. Both characters ultimately learn to navigate their feelings and emerge stronger.
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Growth of Amy and Priya: By the end of their stories, Amy and Priya both experience significant personal growth. Amy learns to appreciate her unique identity, while Priya finds solace in her memories through cooking. Their final moments highlight this change—Amy expresses her identity with confidence, and Priya embraces her mother’s legacy through food.
Personal Reflection: I enjoyed reading "From Scratch" more because the emotional connection to family resonated with me. My attention was captured when Priya began to cook her mother's recipes. I was able to relate to the character when she felt the mixture of sadness and joy in the kitchen. My favorite part of the story was when Priya finally embraces her mother's recipes, feeling her presence with her. I would recommend this story to a friend because it beautifully captures the complexities of loss and the healing power of food.