One reason India was divided into two different countries when it won independence from Britain was because of the religious differences between Muslims and Hindus. Muslim leaders believed that they deserved their own land where they can follow their religion without fear. Another reason is because the differences between Muslims and Hindus grew larger which pushed people to separate them, even though they wanted India to stay united.

Question

Please list all grammical errors or any other errors you can find. please do not change this into your own words, thank you.

Answer 1

1. "when it won independence from Britain" - The phrase could be clearer if it includes “in 1947,” for specificity, but this is not a grammatical error.

2. "Muslim leaders believed that they deserved their own land where they can follow their religion without fear." - The verb tense should be consistent. "can" should be changed to "could" to match "believed."

3. "the differences between Muslims and Hindus grew larger which pushed people to separate them" - A comma should be added before "which" for clarity: "larger, which pushed..."

4. "even though they wanted India to stay united." - "even though" could be seen as somewhat informal in this context, but it is not a grammatical error.

Overall, the issues mainly pertain to verb tense consistency and punctuation.