imagine that you and your partner are going to describe a picture. your partner has started writing a paragraph about the picture. the paragraph may contain errors. read your partner's paragraph and then follow the directions for answering the two question.

Question

Giving a dog a bath is a lot of work. The children are wash there dog. The dog is wet and soapy. The dog is tired of being washed. Bath time has lasted for a long time. write it as a 6th grader

Answer 1

Your partner's paragraph has a few errors. Here's how I would rewrite it, correcting the mistakes and maintaining a 6th-grade level:

Giving a dog a bath is a lot of work. The children are washing their dog. The dog is wet and covered in soap. It looks tired of being washed. Bath time has been going on for a long time!