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You may use this portfolio as your research paper if you meet the following guidelines:
3 direct quotes from Pets
(1) Do you own a dog? If not you should definitely consider getting one. I think every person should own a dog. Dogs are one of the best pets to have. They are the most loveable and loyal creatures that will love you until they die.
(2) One reason everyone should have a dog is because they always protect you. Anytime you are bullied they will stand up for you and protect you. When someone tries to hurt you, they will have your back. One time I was being bullied by someone and my dog Chivas came to my rescue. He barked and scared the bully away. It always comforts me to have my dog by my side because I know he will always protect me if something goes wrong. Another time someone broke into our house in the middle of the night, and thankfully my dog heard the commotion downstairs and scared away the burglar before he could take anything. I read in Dog Fancy magazine the author wrote, “ Dogs are wonderful for protecting. They identify threats and are able to keep their owners safe.” After this moment, I could not help but think, "What if I did not have a dog?" Things would have gone different that night. Someone could have been hurt, and things would have been stolen. This is why dogs will protect you and your family.
(3) Another reason everyone should have a dog is because they are always happy to see you. Wouldn't it be nice to come home and always have someone happy to see you? Even on the hard days, they are there and jumping for joy to see you. My dog Chivas is 13 and doesn't get around as well anymore, but he is still excited to see me when I get home. When he was a puppy, he would get so excited he would almost knock me over. Even if I leave for five minutes and come back, he is still happy to see me.
(4) The last and best reason you should have a dog is because they cheer you up when you are sad. They will always cheer you up when you are upset. They will bring a sense of joy into your heart. Chivas has always cheered me up. When I broke my foot at gymnastics and was very upset because I couldn't do gymnastics for a while, he came up to me and started to give me kisses. It made me feel a lot better inside knowing he was there for me. If he wasn't there to cheer me up, I probably would have been balling my eyes out the whole day. Every time I cry or I am frustrated, he cheers me up. I am so thankful to have him there to cheer me up when something goes wrong. Dogs will always be there for you no matter what.
(5) Some studies even show that a house with a dog is happier than a house without a dog. Dogs are the best kind of pet to own. Everyone should own a dog to protect you, be there when you come home and cheer you up when you are down. Dogs are the most loveable and loyal creatures of all and will love you till they pass. (I think my essay is still a little choppy how can I fix that?)
3 separate print or digital sources
Works cited page properly formatted
Structured body topics that are organized and focused on one main idea.
If you already did this with your Informative essay, you may submit that.
3 direct quotes from Pets
(1) Do you own a dog? If not you should definitely consider getting one. I think every person should own a dog. Dogs are one of the best pets to have. They are the most loveable and loyal creatures that will love you until they die.
(2) One reason everyone should have a dog is because they always protect you. Anytime you are bullied they will stand up for you and protect you. When someone tries to hurt you, they will have your back. One time I was being bullied by someone and my dog Chivas came to my rescue. He barked and scared the bully away. It always comforts me to have my dog by my side because I know he will always protect me if something goes wrong. Another time someone broke into our house in the middle of the night, and thankfully my dog heard the commotion downstairs and scared away the burglar before he could take anything. I read in Dog Fancy magazine the author wrote, “ Dogs are wonderful for protecting. They identify threats and are able to keep their owners safe.” After this moment, I could not help but think, "What if I did not have a dog?" Things would have gone different that night. Someone could have been hurt, and things would have been stolen. This is why dogs will protect you and your family.
(3) Another reason everyone should have a dog is because they are always happy to see you. Wouldn't it be nice to come home and always have someone happy to see you? Even on the hard days, they are there and jumping for joy to see you. My dog Chivas is 13 and doesn't get around as well anymore, but he is still excited to see me when I get home. When he was a puppy, he would get so excited he would almost knock me over. Even if I leave for five minutes and come back, he is still happy to see me.
(4) The last and best reason you should have a dog is because they cheer you up when you are sad. They will always cheer you up when you are upset. They will bring a sense of joy into your heart. Chivas has always cheered me up. When I broke my foot at gymnastics and was very upset because I couldn't do gymnastics for a while, he came up to me and started to give me kisses. It made me feel a lot better inside knowing he was there for me. If he wasn't there to cheer me up, I probably would have been balling my eyes out the whole day. Every time I cry or I am frustrated, he cheers me up. I am so thankful to have him there to cheer me up when something goes wrong. Dogs will always be there for you no matter what.
(5) Some studies even show that a house with a dog is happier than a house without a dog. Dogs are the best kind of pet to own. Everyone should own a dog to protect you, be there when you come home and cheer you up when you are down. Dogs are the most loveable and loyal creatures of all and will love you till they pass. (I think my essay is still a little choppy how can I fix that?)
3 separate print or digital sources
Works cited page properly formatted
Structured body topics that are organized and focused on one main idea.
If you already did this with your Informative essay, you may submit that.
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Certainly! Below is a restructured version of your essay that meets the requirements you've outlined, along with guidelines for properly formatting your Works Cited page. This version aims to improve the flow of your writing and organizes the ideas more clearly.
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## The Importance of Owning a Dog
Dogs have long been celebrated as loyal companions, and for good reason. Every person should consider owning a dog because they are not only loveable but also serve as protectors, create joy in our lives, and provide comfort in times of distress.
### Dogs as Protectors
One significant reason to own a dog is their protective nature. Dogs are instinctively loyal and will stand up for their owners in times of need. “Dogs are wonderful for protecting. They identify threats and are able to keep their owners safe,” writes an author in *Dog Fancy* magazine. For instance, during a past incident where I was bullied, my dog Chivas courageously intervened, barking loudly and scaring the bully away. Furthermore, one night when our home was threatened by a burglar, Chivas’s keen senses alerted him to the danger, and he scared off the intruder before any harm or loss could occur. I often reflect on how different that night could have been without my dog’s presence; his ability to protect us serves as a constant reminder of the security dogs bring to families.
### Joyful Companions
Another compelling reason to welcome a dog into your home is their unmatched ability to bring joy. The simple act of coming home to a dog that is ecstatic to see you can brighten even the darkest of days. My dog Chivas, despite being 13 years old and less mobile than he once was, still greets me with excitement every time I return. In his younger days, his enthusiasm was overwhelming—he would leap toward me, almost knocking me over. Even brief separations elicit a delighted response from him, reminding me that unconditional happiness is just a wag of a tail away.
### Emotional Support
In addition to the joy they bring, dogs also provide essential emotional support. Whenever I encounter sadness or frustration, Chivas is there to comfort me. For instance, when I broke my foot while practicing gymnastics, I was devastated about my inability to participate. In that tough moment, Chivas approached me, showering me with affection, which helped lift my spirits. His unwavering companionship reassures me that I am not alone during difficult times. The presence of a dog in one’s life can significantly enhance emotional well-being, turning tears into smiles.
### Conclusion
In conclusion, dogs are not only valuable companions but also vital protectors, sources of joy, and comforters. Research even suggests that houses with dogs tend to be happier than those without. “Dogs are the most loveable and loyal creatures of all and will love you till they pass.” For these reasons, I firmly believe that everyone should experience the profound benefits of owning a dog.
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### Works Cited
- "Dogs are wonderful for protecting. They identify threats and are able to keep their owners safe." *Dog Fancy*.
- Your interviews or any other sources you might have consulted.
- Add any other relevant sources used in your research, formatted in proper citation style (MLA, APA, etc.).
### Formatting Your Works Cited Page (MLA Style Example)
1. Use a header that includes your last name, followed by the page number in the upper right-hand corner.
2. Title the page "Works Cited" and center the title.
3. Each entry should be formatted with a hanging indent (the first line at the margin, and subsequent lines indented).
Example (adjust according to your sources and their formatting):
```
Works Cited
“Dogs are wonderful for protecting. They identify threats and are able to keep their owners safe.” *Dog Fancy*.
Last Name, First Name. *Title of Your Source*. Publisher, Year of Publication.
```
By following this structure, your essay will be well-organized, with clear main ideas and supporting details. Make sure to add your sources where needed to fulfill the requirement of three separate print or digital sources and to format your Works Cited page appropriately.
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## The Importance of Owning a Dog
Dogs have long been celebrated as loyal companions, and for good reason. Every person should consider owning a dog because they are not only loveable but also serve as protectors, create joy in our lives, and provide comfort in times of distress.
### Dogs as Protectors
One significant reason to own a dog is their protective nature. Dogs are instinctively loyal and will stand up for their owners in times of need. “Dogs are wonderful for protecting. They identify threats and are able to keep their owners safe,” writes an author in *Dog Fancy* magazine. For instance, during a past incident where I was bullied, my dog Chivas courageously intervened, barking loudly and scaring the bully away. Furthermore, one night when our home was threatened by a burglar, Chivas’s keen senses alerted him to the danger, and he scared off the intruder before any harm or loss could occur. I often reflect on how different that night could have been without my dog’s presence; his ability to protect us serves as a constant reminder of the security dogs bring to families.
### Joyful Companions
Another compelling reason to welcome a dog into your home is their unmatched ability to bring joy. The simple act of coming home to a dog that is ecstatic to see you can brighten even the darkest of days. My dog Chivas, despite being 13 years old and less mobile than he once was, still greets me with excitement every time I return. In his younger days, his enthusiasm was overwhelming—he would leap toward me, almost knocking me over. Even brief separations elicit a delighted response from him, reminding me that unconditional happiness is just a wag of a tail away.
### Emotional Support
In addition to the joy they bring, dogs also provide essential emotional support. Whenever I encounter sadness or frustration, Chivas is there to comfort me. For instance, when I broke my foot while practicing gymnastics, I was devastated about my inability to participate. In that tough moment, Chivas approached me, showering me with affection, which helped lift my spirits. His unwavering companionship reassures me that I am not alone during difficult times. The presence of a dog in one’s life can significantly enhance emotional well-being, turning tears into smiles.
### Conclusion
In conclusion, dogs are not only valuable companions but also vital protectors, sources of joy, and comforters. Research even suggests that houses with dogs tend to be happier than those without. “Dogs are the most loveable and loyal creatures of all and will love you till they pass.” For these reasons, I firmly believe that everyone should experience the profound benefits of owning a dog.
---
### Works Cited
- "Dogs are wonderful for protecting. They identify threats and are able to keep their owners safe." *Dog Fancy*.
- Your interviews or any other sources you might have consulted.
- Add any other relevant sources used in your research, formatted in proper citation style (MLA, APA, etc.).
### Formatting Your Works Cited Page (MLA Style Example)
1. Use a header that includes your last name, followed by the page number in the upper right-hand corner.
2. Title the page "Works Cited" and center the title.
3. Each entry should be formatted with a hanging indent (the first line at the margin, and subsequent lines indented).
Example (adjust according to your sources and their formatting):
```
Works Cited
“Dogs are wonderful for protecting. They identify threats and are able to keep their owners safe.” *Dog Fancy*.
Last Name, First Name. *Title of Your Source*. Publisher, Year of Publication.
```
By following this structure, your essay will be well-organized, with clear main ideas and supporting details. Make sure to add your sources where needed to fulfill the requirement of three separate print or digital sources and to format your Works Cited page appropriately.
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