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Graduating from fifth grade was an amazing experience. We had a big ceremony, and all the parents came to cheer us on. I felt proud of what I had accomplished, but I also felt a little sad because we were leaving our elementary school days behind. After the speeches, my friends and I took tons of pictures together, and we laughed about all the great memories we shared. Although I was nervous about starting middle school, I was excited to meet new friends and explore different subjects, which made me feel hopeful about what was to come.
Revise this paragraph by using at least one simple sentence, at least one complex sentence, at least one compound sentence, and at least one compound-complex sentence in your writing. Please make the writing sound like a seventh grader and everything clear and easy to read.
Revise this paragraph by using at least one simple sentence, at least one complex sentence, at least one compound sentence, and at least one compound-complex sentence in your writing. Please make the writing sound like a seventh grader and everything clear and easy to read.
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Graduating from fifth grade was an amazing experience. We had a big ceremony with all the parents cheering for us. I felt proud of my accomplishments, but I was also a bit sad because we were leaving our elementary school days behind. After the speeches, my friends and I took tons of pictures, and we laughed about all the great memories we shared. I was nervous about starting middle school, yet I couldn’t help but feel excited to meet new friends and explore different subjects. Although change can be scary, I felt hopeful about what lay ahead because I knew we would support each other through this new journey.