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Rewrite the fallowing email with perfect writing and more details and arguments
Good morning. First of all, my name is Oscar Manuel Gonzalez. I am writing from the email of HCI College because until last week I was a student in their RN program. After two weeks of chaos and disorganization, I decided to separate from the program. The next day, I woke up with a debt of around $10,000. I left the program primarily because I don't believe it is suitable for any student. The instructors don’t know what they’re talking about, they are rude, and the classes they try to teach do not match the content in the students' applications. Despite paying a high price to attend this institution, the materials provided to students are of the worst quality; we are still waiting for a physical book that was supposed to have been delivered on the first day. You can see students sleeping in classes, and the clinical placements are the worst of the worst. The nurses at VITAS don’t allow to touch the patients, and any time they do allow it, it's only to bathe, clean, and feed the poor patients. Before starting the clinical rotation, we have to go to HELIX clinics to complete vaccinations and titters that supposedly the school pays for. Last week, I received a bill from HELIX charging me for their services, to which I never gave authorization or information for them to bill. There is more to say, but for now, I think that is enough to justify never granting them accreditation because they truly do not meet even 1% of the requirements. As a victimized student, it is my duty to inform you of what is happening, and I hope you act and revoke the accreditation of the West Palm Beach campus and never grant it to Fort Lauderdale because it is unfair for people to go there misled. Before signing any enrollment document, everything seems wonderful; after they have you committed, that’s when the nightmare begins to rob your money and treat you like an animal in the "veterinary program."
Good morning. First of all, my name is Oscar Manuel Gonzalez. I am writing from the email of HCI College because until last week I was a student in their RN program. After two weeks of chaos and disorganization, I decided to separate from the program. The next day, I woke up with a debt of around $10,000. I left the program primarily because I don't believe it is suitable for any student. The instructors don’t know what they’re talking about, they are rude, and the classes they try to teach do not match the content in the students' applications. Despite paying a high price to attend this institution, the materials provided to students are of the worst quality; we are still waiting for a physical book that was supposed to have been delivered on the first day. You can see students sleeping in classes, and the clinical placements are the worst of the worst. The nurses at VITAS don’t allow to touch the patients, and any time they do allow it, it's only to bathe, clean, and feed the poor patients. Before starting the clinical rotation, we have to go to HELIX clinics to complete vaccinations and titters that supposedly the school pays for. Last week, I received a bill from HELIX charging me for their services, to which I never gave authorization or information for them to bill. There is more to say, but for now, I think that is enough to justify never granting them accreditation because they truly do not meet even 1% of the requirements. As a victimized student, it is my duty to inform you of what is happening, and I hope you act and revoke the accreditation of the West Palm Beach campus and never grant it to Fort Lauderdale because it is unfair for people to go there misled. Before signing any enrollment document, everything seems wonderful; after they have you committed, that’s when the nightmare begins to rob your money and treat you like an animal in the "veterinary program."
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GPT-4o mini
Subject: Urgent Concerns Regarding HCI College RN Program
Good morning,
My name is Oscar Manuel Gonzalez, and I am reaching out to you from my HCI College email address, as I was enrolled in their RN program until last week. After enduring two weeks of overwhelming chaos and disorganization, I ultimately made the decision to separate from the program. However, upon my departure, I was faced with an unexpected debt of approximately $10,000.
I believe it is important to articulate the reasons behind my withdrawal, as I do not consider this program suitable for any student aspiring to become a registered nurse. The educational experience fell significantly short of my expectations for several reasons, which I feel compelled to highlight:
1. **Quality of Instruction**: The instructors demonstrated a concerning lack of knowledge and professionalism. Their teaching methods were ineffective, and many students struggled to follow the curriculum as it was frequently misaligned with the course content. This inconsistency not only hindered our learning but also left us feeling frustrated and unsupported.
2. **Educational Materials**: Despite the significant tuition costs, the materials provided were of alarmingly poor quality. A prime example of this was the physical textbook that was promised for delivery on our first day but has yet to be received. This oversight has left students ill-equipped to engage fully with the course material.
3. **Classroom Environment**: It was disheartening to witness my fellow classmates disengaging during lectures, with some even falling asleep in class. This indicates a lack of interest generated by the instruction, which is concerning given the high stakes of our education.
4. **Clinical Placements**: The clinical experiences have been nothing short of disappointing. During placements at VITAS, the nursing staff often restricted our ability to interact with patients, limiting our practical learning opportunities to basic tasks such as bathing, cleaning, and feeding. This lack of hands-on experience is detrimental to our development as competent future nurses.
5. **Unexpected Financial Burdens**: Additionally, prior to our clinical rotations, we were required to visit HELIX clinics for vaccinations and titers, which the school claimed it would cover. However, I recently received a bill from HELIX for services rendered without my prior consent, raising serious concerns about the administrative practices and transparency of HCI College.
In light of these issues, I believe there are substantial grounds to reconsider the accreditation status of the West Palm Beach campus and prevent any future accreditation of the Fort Lauderdale location. Students deserve a credible and supportive educational environment, and it is disheartening to feel misled by the institution's promises during the recruitment phase.
As a concerned former student, I feel it is my responsibility to bring these matters to your attention. I sincerely hope that you will consider my observations seriously and take appropriate action to protect the interests of future students.
Thank you for your time and attention to this critical issue.
Sincerely,
Oscar Manuel Gonzalez
Good morning,
My name is Oscar Manuel Gonzalez, and I am reaching out to you from my HCI College email address, as I was enrolled in their RN program until last week. After enduring two weeks of overwhelming chaos and disorganization, I ultimately made the decision to separate from the program. However, upon my departure, I was faced with an unexpected debt of approximately $10,000.
I believe it is important to articulate the reasons behind my withdrawal, as I do not consider this program suitable for any student aspiring to become a registered nurse. The educational experience fell significantly short of my expectations for several reasons, which I feel compelled to highlight:
1. **Quality of Instruction**: The instructors demonstrated a concerning lack of knowledge and professionalism. Their teaching methods were ineffective, and many students struggled to follow the curriculum as it was frequently misaligned with the course content. This inconsistency not only hindered our learning but also left us feeling frustrated and unsupported.
2. **Educational Materials**: Despite the significant tuition costs, the materials provided were of alarmingly poor quality. A prime example of this was the physical textbook that was promised for delivery on our first day but has yet to be received. This oversight has left students ill-equipped to engage fully with the course material.
3. **Classroom Environment**: It was disheartening to witness my fellow classmates disengaging during lectures, with some even falling asleep in class. This indicates a lack of interest generated by the instruction, which is concerning given the high stakes of our education.
4. **Clinical Placements**: The clinical experiences have been nothing short of disappointing. During placements at VITAS, the nursing staff often restricted our ability to interact with patients, limiting our practical learning opportunities to basic tasks such as bathing, cleaning, and feeding. This lack of hands-on experience is detrimental to our development as competent future nurses.
5. **Unexpected Financial Burdens**: Additionally, prior to our clinical rotations, we were required to visit HELIX clinics for vaccinations and titers, which the school claimed it would cover. However, I recently received a bill from HELIX for services rendered without my prior consent, raising serious concerns about the administrative practices and transparency of HCI College.
In light of these issues, I believe there are substantial grounds to reconsider the accreditation status of the West Palm Beach campus and prevent any future accreditation of the Fort Lauderdale location. Students deserve a credible and supportive educational environment, and it is disheartening to feel misled by the institution's promises during the recruitment phase.
As a concerned former student, I feel it is my responsibility to bring these matters to your attention. I sincerely hope that you will consider my observations seriously and take appropriate action to protect the interests of future students.
Thank you for your time and attention to this critical issue.
Sincerely,
Oscar Manuel Gonzalez