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rewrite the fallowing email with perfect correction and more detail in english
buenos dias,primero que todo mi nombre es Oscar Manuel Gonzalez, escribo desde el correo de HCI College porque hasta la semana pasada fui estudiante de ellos en el programa RN,despues de 2 semanas de caos y desorganización decidí separarme de el programa,al dia siguiente amanecí con una deuda de alrededor de 10000 dolares,primeramente deje el programa porque no creo que sea adecuado para ningún estudiante,los profesores no saben de que hablan,son groseros y las clases que tratan de impartir no son el mismo contenido que esta en las aplicaciones de los estudiantes, a pesar de pagar un alto precio por asistir a esta institucion, los materiales que se les dan a los estudiantes son de la peor calidad,aun estan esperando un libro fisico que se debiua haber entregado desde el primer dia,pueden ver estudiantes durmiendo en las clases, los sitios de clinica son lo peor de lo pero,las enfermeras de VITAS ,no dejan tocar a los pasientes y si alguna lo permite es para banar ,limpiar y dar de comer a los pobres pasientes,antes de empesar la rotacion clinicas debemois ir a las clinicas HELIX para completar bascunas y titers que supuestamente la escuela paga por ello,la semana pasada recivi un bill de HELIX cobrandome por sus servicios,a mi seguro que en ningun momento di la autorizacion ni la informacion para que cobraran,es mas que decir pero por el momento creo qwue es suficiente para nunca tener su acreditacion porque realmente no reunen ni el 1% de las condiciones,mi deber como estudiante victima es informarles de lo que esta sucediendo y espero que tomen medidas y retiren la acreditacion de west palm beach campus y nunca otorguen la de fort lauderdale porque no es justo que las personas vallan ahi enganadas, si porque antes de firmar cualquier enrollment document todos es maravilloso,despues que te tienen comprometido es cuando la pesadilla comienza para robar tu dinero y tratarte como un animal del "programa de veterinaria"
buenos dias,primero que todo mi nombre es Oscar Manuel Gonzalez, escribo desde el correo de HCI College porque hasta la semana pasada fui estudiante de ellos en el programa RN,despues de 2 semanas de caos y desorganización decidí separarme de el programa,al dia siguiente amanecí con una deuda de alrededor de 10000 dolares,primeramente deje el programa porque no creo que sea adecuado para ningún estudiante,los profesores no saben de que hablan,son groseros y las clases que tratan de impartir no son el mismo contenido que esta en las aplicaciones de los estudiantes, a pesar de pagar un alto precio por asistir a esta institucion, los materiales que se les dan a los estudiantes son de la peor calidad,aun estan esperando un libro fisico que se debiua haber entregado desde el primer dia,pueden ver estudiantes durmiendo en las clases, los sitios de clinica son lo peor de lo pero,las enfermeras de VITAS ,no dejan tocar a los pasientes y si alguna lo permite es para banar ,limpiar y dar de comer a los pobres pasientes,antes de empesar la rotacion clinicas debemois ir a las clinicas HELIX para completar bascunas y titers que supuestamente la escuela paga por ello,la semana pasada recivi un bill de HELIX cobrandome por sus servicios,a mi seguro que en ningun momento di la autorizacion ni la informacion para que cobraran,es mas que decir pero por el momento creo qwue es suficiente para nunca tener su acreditacion porque realmente no reunen ni el 1% de las condiciones,mi deber como estudiante victima es informarles de lo que esta sucediendo y espero que tomen medidas y retiren la acreditacion de west palm beach campus y nunca otorguen la de fort lauderdale porque no es justo que las personas vallan ahi enganadas, si porque antes de firmar cualquier enrollment document todos es maravilloso,despues que te tienen comprometido es cuando la pesadilla comienza para robar tu dinero y tratarte como un animal del "programa de veterinaria"
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Subject: Urgent Concerns Regarding RN Program at HCI College
Dear [Recipient's Name],
I hope this message finds you well. My name is Oscar Manuel Gonzalez, and I am reaching out from the email account of HCI College, as I was a student in the RN program until last week. After experiencing two weeks characterized by chaos and disorganization, I made the difficult decision to withdraw from the program.
To my shock, the following day I discovered that I had incurred a debt of approximately $10,000. I initially left the program because I believe it is not conducive to a positive learning experience for any student. The instructors seem to lack a clear understanding of the material they are teaching, and their behavior can often be rude. Moreover, the course content provided does not align with the materials available to students.
Despite the significant tuition costs associated with attending this institution, the quality of educational materials provided is subpar. For instance, many students are still waiting for the physical textbooks that were supposed to be issued on the first day of class. I have observed students sleeping during lectures, which is indicative of the overall lack of engagement and effectiveness in the teaching approach.
Furthermore, the clinical sites are in a deplorable state. Specifically, the nurses at VITAS do not allow us to interact with patients, and when interaction is permitted, it is limited to basic tasks like bathing, cleaning, and feeding patients. Before starting our clinical rotations, we are required to attend HELIX clinics to complete vaccinations and titers, for which the school is supposedly responsible for payment. However, last week I received a bill from HELIX charging me for their services, even though I never authorized or provided my insurance information for such charges.
There is certainly much more to say, but I believe I have shared enough to illustrate the serious concerns regarding the program’s accreditation. It is my duty as a concerned former student to inform you about these issues, and I strongly urge you to take appropriate action. I hope the accreditation for the West Palm Beach campus will be reconsidered, and that the Fort Lauderdale campus will not receive accreditation, to prevent others from being misled into this situation.
Before enrolling, everything appeared promising, but once students are committed, the reality becomes a nightmare focused on financial exploitation rather than education.
Thank you for your attention to this matter, and I hope to see positive changes implemented for the benefit of future students.
Sincerely,
Oscar Manuel Gonzalez
[Your Contact Information]
Dear [Recipient's Name],
I hope this message finds you well. My name is Oscar Manuel Gonzalez, and I am reaching out from the email account of HCI College, as I was a student in the RN program until last week. After experiencing two weeks characterized by chaos and disorganization, I made the difficult decision to withdraw from the program.
To my shock, the following day I discovered that I had incurred a debt of approximately $10,000. I initially left the program because I believe it is not conducive to a positive learning experience for any student. The instructors seem to lack a clear understanding of the material they are teaching, and their behavior can often be rude. Moreover, the course content provided does not align with the materials available to students.
Despite the significant tuition costs associated with attending this institution, the quality of educational materials provided is subpar. For instance, many students are still waiting for the physical textbooks that were supposed to be issued on the first day of class. I have observed students sleeping during lectures, which is indicative of the overall lack of engagement and effectiveness in the teaching approach.
Furthermore, the clinical sites are in a deplorable state. Specifically, the nurses at VITAS do not allow us to interact with patients, and when interaction is permitted, it is limited to basic tasks like bathing, cleaning, and feeding patients. Before starting our clinical rotations, we are required to attend HELIX clinics to complete vaccinations and titers, for which the school is supposedly responsible for payment. However, last week I received a bill from HELIX charging me for their services, even though I never authorized or provided my insurance information for such charges.
There is certainly much more to say, but I believe I have shared enough to illustrate the serious concerns regarding the program’s accreditation. It is my duty as a concerned former student to inform you about these issues, and I strongly urge you to take appropriate action. I hope the accreditation for the West Palm Beach campus will be reconsidered, and that the Fort Lauderdale campus will not receive accreditation, to prevent others from being misled into this situation.
Before enrolling, everything appeared promising, but once students are committed, the reality becomes a nightmare focused on financial exploitation rather than education.
Thank you for your attention to this matter, and I hope to see positive changes implemented for the benefit of future students.
Sincerely,
Oscar Manuel Gonzalez
[Your Contact Information]