Question

What do you want to do if you have a lot of money?

1. I want to donate a large sum of money to a society for poor people. To die with money is a shame.]

2. I will go abroad to study English. I like to go to Harvard University, where I will major in economics. After graduating from the University, I will teach economics at Korea University.

3. I will travel to the USA. I will visit many beautiful places there such as Golden Gate Bridge, Niagara Falls, Las Vegas, etc.

4. I want to buy a brand new car. I will travel to many wonder places in our country.

5. I want to buy a lot of comic books and read them all day long without going out. I can order food on the Internet. I don't need to go to work. It would be fantastic.

6. I want to save money to a bank. I know financial technology. If I deposit 30,000 dollars. I can get a lot of interest in a year. I will prepare for the future. If I spend lots of money, in the future, I will repent for that.

(Would you like to check the passages? Correct errors, please.)

Answer 1

1. = fine

2. I will go abroad to study English. I <b>would</b> like to go to Harvard University <b>to</b> major in economics. After graduating from the University, I will <b>eventually</b> teach economics at Korea University.

3. I will travel to the USA <b>to</b> visit many beautiful <b>places, such as the</b> Golden Gate Bridge, Niagara Falls, Las Vegas, etc.

4. I want to buy a brand new car. I will travel to many <b>wonderful</b> places in our country.

5. = fine

6. I want to save money <b>in</b> a bank. I know financial technology. If I deposit 30,000 <b>dollars, I can earn</b> a lot of interest in a year. I will prepare for the future. If I spend lots of money <b>now, I will be sorry in the future. </b>