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help me write this in a proper english “ day 10/11. we actually counting hours to reach there my chocolate. i remember it might be 5 years back where by i was with my mom at moratiwa complex i think he was scared to talk to me because are no ways you were gonna talk to me. with the name “my chocolate “ it held our friendship for years. i remember he used to say you should come to moratiwa so i can buy you your chocolate that’s where he started calling me by that name. fast forward you can’t not groove with this person he’s such a problem the next minute he’s here the another he’s no where to be found you will then see him on the way back home and there’s no way we can go peacefully so, we fight all the way. but rather than that he’s such a cool person and also a loverboy. i’ve never seen a boy in love just like him. 50 years to you.“
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"Day 10/11: We are actually counting the hours until we can see each other, my chocolate. I remember about five years ago, I was at Moratiwa Complex with my mom. I think he was scared to talk to me, because there was no way he would approach me first. The nickname “my chocolate” has represented our friendship for years. I recall him saying that I should come to Moratiwa so he could buy me chocolate; that’s how he started calling me that name.
Fast forward to now, you can't have a good time without this person around. He’s quite unpredictable—one moment he's here, and the next minute he’s nowhere to be found. Often, I’ll see him on my way home, and our journey never seems to be peaceful; we end up bickering all the way back. But despite that, he’s such a cool person and definitely a romantic at heart. I've never seen a boy in love like him. Here’s to you, for 50 years!"
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Feel free to adjust any part of it to better suit your voice or the message you want to convey!
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"Day 10/11: We are actually counting the hours until we can see each other, my chocolate. I remember about five years ago, I was at Moratiwa Complex with my mom. I think he was scared to talk to me, because there was no way he would approach me first. The nickname “my chocolate” has represented our friendship for years. I recall him saying that I should come to Moratiwa so he could buy me chocolate; that’s how he started calling me that name.
Fast forward to now, you can't have a good time without this person around. He’s quite unpredictable—one moment he's here, and the next minute he’s nowhere to be found. Often, I’ll see him on my way home, and our journey never seems to be peaceful; we end up bickering all the way back. But despite that, he’s such a cool person and definitely a romantic at heart. I've never seen a boy in love like him. Here’s to you, for 50 years!"
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Feel free to adjust any part of it to better suit your voice or the message you want to convey!
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