check these sentences to see any grammitical errors or repitivness or any other error. list all errors and do not change it into your own words.

Question

My idea for the Shopping mall is to renovate an existing mall and, in an area where the impact would be lower.

I believe my solution is most effective because instead of tearing down an ecosystem to build a new shopping mall, the town could just rebuild an old one.

This helps saves ecosystems from being destroyed. Trees will not have to be cut down as the area the old mall will be in will likely have little to no trees to cut.

Answer 1

Here are the errors and issues identified in the sentences:

1. In the first sentence, the phrase "and, in an area where the impact would be lower" is awkwardly placed and may suggest a fragment. The comma before "in" is unnecessary and creates confusion.

2. In the second sentence, "the town could just rebuild an old one" could be seen as repetitive since "old one" refers back to "an existing mall."

3. In the third sentence, "helps saves" is incorrect; it should be "helps save" to match the grammatical structure.

4. There is some redundancy in the phrase "the area the old mall will be in will likely have little to no trees to cut," which could be streamlined but is not a grammatical error.

Overall, the sentences contain awkward phrasing and could benefit from clearer structure, but these are the primary errors noted.