Sentence Construction Quick Check 1 of 51 of 5 Items Question Use the passage to answer the question. Enrico had to work from home and take care of his two-year-old son. They walked over to the park, and while there, Enrico planned to make a call to his co-worker Paul. Enrico, helping his son on the playground slide, talked to him using a hands-free headset. Revise the passage to correct any unclear antecedents. (1 point) Responses Enrico had to work from home and take care of his two-year-old son. They walked over to the park, and while there, Enrico planned to make a call to his co-worker Paul. Enrico, helping his son on the playground slide, talked to Paul using a hands-free headset. Enrico had to work from home and take care of his two-year-old son. They walked over to the park, and while there, Enrico planned to make a call to his co-worker Paul. Enrico, helping his son on the playground slide, talked to Paul using a hands-free headset. Enrico had to work from home and take care of his two-year-old son. Enrico planned to make a call to his co-worker Paul while they walked over to the park. Enrico, helping his son on the playground slide, talked to Paul using a hands-free headset. Enrico had to work from home and take care of his two-year-old son. Enrico planned to make a call to his co-worker Paul while they walked over to the park. Enrico, helping his son on the playground slide, talked to Paul using a hands-free headset. Enrico had to work from home and take care of his two-year-old son. They walked over to the park, and while there, Enrico planned to make a call to his co-worker Paul. Enrico talked to Paul using a hands-free headset while helping him on the playground slide. Enrico had to work from home and take care of his two-year-old son. They walked over to the park, and while there, Enrico planned to make a call to his co-worker Paul. Enrico talked to Paul using a hands-free headset while helping him on the playground slide. Enrico had to work from home and take care of his two-year-old son. They walked over to the park, and while there, Enrico planned to make a call to his co-worker Paul. Helping his son on the playground slide, Enrico talked to him using a hands-free headset. Enrico had to work from home and take care of his two-year-old son. They walked over to the park, and while there, Enrico planned to make a call to his co-worker Paul. Helping his son on the playground slide, Enrico talked to him using a hands-free headset. Skip to navigation

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To clarify the unclear antecedents in the passage, the most effective revision is:

"Enrico had to work from home and take care of his two-year-old son. They walked over to the park, and while there, Enrico planned to make a call to his co-worker Paul. Helping his son on the playground slide, Enrico talked to Paul using a hands-free headset."

This revision ensures that the antecedent "he" clearly refers to Enrico when describing the call to Paul.