The campers rowed across the lake set up their tent in a clearing under the trees.
What is the best way to revise the sentence?
Responses
The campers rowed across the lake; and they set up their tent in a clearing under the trees.
The campers rowed across the lake; and they set up their tent in a clearing under the trees.
The campers rowed across the lake; and set up their tent in a clearing under the trees.
The campers rowed across the lake; and set up their tent in a clearing under the trees.
The campers rowed across the lake and set up their tent in a clearing under the trees.
The campers rowed across the lake and set up their tent in a clearing under the trees.
The campers rowed across the lake, they set up their tent in a clearing under the trees.
1 answer
The best way to revise the sentence is:
The campers rowed across the lake and set up their tent in a clearing under the trees.
This option correctly uses a coordinating conjunction ("and") to connect the two related actions in a clear and concise manner.
