The campers rowed across the lake set up their tent in a clearing under the trees.
What is the best way to revise the sentence?
Responses
The campers rowed across the lake; and they set up their tent in a clearing under the trees.
The campers rowed across the lake; and they set up their tent in a clearing under the trees.
The campers rowed across the lake; and set up their tent in a clearing under the trees.
The campers rowed across the lake; and set up their tent in a clearing under the trees.
The campers rowed across the lake and set up their tent in a clearing under the trees.
The campers rowed across the lake and set up their tent in a clearing under the trees.
The campers rowed across the lake, they set up their tent in a clearing under the trees.
1 answer
The best way to revise the sentence is:
The campers rowed across the lake and set up their tent in a clearing under the trees.
This option correctly combines the two actions into a single, coherent sentence without unnecessary conjunctions or punctuation.
