Last fall, our charity had a walkathon we raised $2,000 for winter coats.
What is the best way to revise the sentence?
Responses
Last fall, our charity had a walkathon, we raised $2,000 for winter coats.
Last fall, our charity had a walkathon, we raised $2,000 for winter coats.
Last fall, our charity had a walkathon; and we raised $2,000 for winter coats.
Last fall, our charity had a walkathon; and we raised $2,000 for winter coats.
Last fall, our charity had a walkathon; raised $2,000 for winter coats.
Last fall, our charity had a walkathon; raised $2,000 for winter coats.
Last fall, our charity had a walkathon, and we raised $2,000 for winter coats.
1 answer
The best way to revise the sentence is:
Last fall, our charity had a walkathon, and we raised $2,000 for winter coats.
This option correctly combines the two independent clauses with a conjunction, making the sentence grammatically correct and clear.
