Use the analogy to complete the activity.

Question

tire: bicycle :: window : house

In 1–2 sentences, explain the relationship in the analogy.

The relationship in the analogy is on how a tire is important to a bike and a window is important to a house. A tire allows a bike to stand up and move, while a window helps provide light naturally and air if the window is open.

(please do not change this into your words, just correct and list any grammatical and repetitive errors)

Answer 1

1. "tire: bicycle :: window : house" does not require the double colon; it should be presented as "tire: bicycle :: window : house".

2. The phrase "is important to a bike" can be improved for clarity. Consider changing it to "is essential for a bike".

3. The phrase "allows a bike to stand up and move" is slightly repetitive. You could simplify it to "enables a bike to function".

4. In the second sentence, "helps provide light naturally and air if the window is open" could be made more concise. Consider changing it to "provides natural light and ventilation when open".

5. The overall structure can be more fluid.

Here’s a corrected version considering the points above:

"The relationship in the analogy is that a tire is essential for a bicycle, enabling it to function, just as a window is important for a house, providing natural light and ventilation when open."