Question
Dave’s writing teacher gave him constructive criticism on his last story. She told him he was over-describing the setting and instructed him to revise it. What is one of the MOST effective ways to do this?
(1 point)
Responses
Eliminate one of the central characters.
Eliminate one of the central characters.
Cut down on the amount of dialogue between the characters.
Cut down on the amount of dialogue between the characters.
Limit the amount of details so he doesn’t bog down the story.
Limit the amount of details so he doesn’t bog down the story.
Rearrange the order of the scenes.
(1 point)
Responses
Eliminate one of the central characters.
Eliminate one of the central characters.
Cut down on the amount of dialogue between the characters.
Cut down on the amount of dialogue between the characters.
Limit the amount of details so he doesn’t bog down the story.
Limit the amount of details so he doesn’t bog down the story.
Rearrange the order of the scenes.
Answers
GPT-4o mini
The MOST effective way for Dave to address his teacher's criticism about over-describing the setting is to **limit the amount of details so he doesn’t bog down the story.** This approach allows him to maintain a vivid setting while ensuring that it does not overwhelm the narrative or distract from the plot and character development.