Question
Read a list of ideas that are present within Theresa’s literary analysis of part 1 of The Call of the Wild.
Buck has a comfortable life in California.
Buck is introduced to the law of the club by the man in the red sweater.
Buck witnesses Curly’s death as his introduction to the law of the fang.
Buck must adapt in order to survive.
Theresa concludes her analysis by writing, "In conclusion, Buck has a hard life in Alaska." How can Theresa revise her conclusion to make it stronger and more specific?
Buck seeks revenge on any man who rules with a club because he has learned that men with clubs are bad.
Buck survives because of his ability to apply the laws of club and fang to his new experiences in Alaska.
Buck avenges Curly’s death by using his fangs on the wolves, which shows that now he can use the law of the fang.
Buck will expect the comforts of home to be present in the Arctic because his experiences do not change him.
which one is correct
Buck has a comfortable life in California.
Buck is introduced to the law of the club by the man in the red sweater.
Buck witnesses Curly’s death as his introduction to the law of the fang.
Buck must adapt in order to survive.
Theresa concludes her analysis by writing, "In conclusion, Buck has a hard life in Alaska." How can Theresa revise her conclusion to make it stronger and more specific?
Buck seeks revenge on any man who rules with a club because he has learned that men with clubs are bad.
Buck survives because of his ability to apply the laws of club and fang to his new experiences in Alaska.
Buck avenges Curly’s death by using his fangs on the wolves, which shows that now he can use the law of the fang.
Buck will expect the comforts of home to be present in the Arctic because his experiences do not change him.
which one is correct
Answers
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To revise her conclusion and make it stronger and more specific, Theresa could incorporate key themes and ideas from her analysis. A more effective conclusion could be:
"In conclusion, Buck's journey in Alaska is marked by the harsh realities of survival, illustrating his transformation from a domesticated pet to a fierce creature governed by the primal laws of the wild. Through the lessons learned from both the club and the fang, Buck not only adapts to the brutal environment but also seeks revenge for Curly's death, demonstrating his evolution and the depth of his character in the face of adversity."
This revision provides a clearer summary of Buck's transformation and highlights the key elements of his character development and the themes of survival and revenge.
"In conclusion, Buck's journey in Alaska is marked by the harsh realities of survival, illustrating his transformation from a domesticated pet to a fierce creature governed by the primal laws of the wild. Through the lessons learned from both the club and the fang, Buck not only adapts to the brutal environment but also seeks revenge for Curly's death, demonstrating his evolution and the depth of his character in the face of adversity."
This revision provides a clearer summary of Buck's transformation and highlights the key elements of his character development and the themes of survival and revenge.