The piece of evidence that does not support the writer’s argument and should be removed or replaced is:
“This change has led many more people to take up photography as a hobby.”
While this statement acknowledges the increased accessibility of photography due to digital technology, it does not align with the writer’s argument about the detrimental effects of digital photography on the quality and artistry of the craft. Instead, it highlights a positive outcome of the digital transition, which undermines the writer's claims about the negative impacts on photographers and the pursuit of excellence in photography.