Question

The following is an excerpt from a student's essay on renewable energy for her science class. Read the excerpt and complete the task that follows.

I believe renewable energy is very important. Without renewable energy sources, the world will deplete its finite resources and we will be left with nothing. Furthermore, renewable energy sources are often cleaner and are much more sustainable. As a result, we should invest more in renewable energy sources and transition away from finite fossil fuels.


Which of the following revisions to the underlined sentence would be the best thesis statement?
A.
Renewable energy is critical to invest in if we are to sustain the same level of world growth.

B.
I believe renewable energy is paramount to the future of the world.

C.
Although some believe renewable energy is not important, I believe it is.

D.
Renewable energy is very important for many different reasons.

Answer 1

The best revision to the underlined sentence as a thesis statement is:

A. Renewable energy is critical to invest in if we are to sustain the same level of world growth.

This option clearly presents a strong, specific stance and indicates the significance of renewable energy in the context of future growth, making it a more effective thesis statement than the others.