Question

What is a good Thesis Statement for my topice. My topic is Nutrition, Health, and Safety Training for Early Childhood Educators.

Answer 1

Isn't that a rather broad topic? I would rather write on the weather.

Narrow your topic, so you can get specific and avoid vague generalities.

What about your state training requirements for training? Surely you could do an analysis of the adequacy of those.

Answer 2

identifies goals for training