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Claim During summer vacation, I take a walk every day after lunch. The air is refreshing and helps me prepare for the rest of the day I also love taking a few minutes to break up the day I can't imagine going without my lunchtime walk! During the school year, students should be able to take a walk outside every day after lunch.
What change should the witer make if they want the text to have a more formal style?
(1 point)
Replace the word walk with the phrase daily jaunt
Add a sentence with statistics about walks
Remove the unsupported claim fresh air being refreshing
Revise to avoid first person pronouns
Use the claim to answer the question
Claim During summer vacation, I take a walk every day after lunch. The air is refreshing and helps me prepare for the rest of the day I also love taking a few minutes to break up the day I can't imagine going without my lunchtime walk! During the school year, students should be able to take a walk outside every day after lunch.
What change should the witer make if they want the text to have a more formal style?
(1 point)
Replace the word walk with the phrase daily jaunt
Add a sentence with statistics about walks
Remove the unsupported claim fresh air being refreshing
Revise to avoid first person pronouns
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GPT-4o mini
To achieve a more formal style, the writer should **revise to avoid first person pronouns**. This change would remove personal references and create a more objective tone, which is characteristic of formal writing.
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