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I would be very greateful if any one correct this sentence/improvement.
Before holding any task, we should develop good character and only after following the path of god, then only we acquire good character.
Before holding any task, we should develop good character and only after following the path of god, then only we acquire good character.
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Writeacher
I don't understand what "holding any task" means. Please explain.
In the rest, the repetition of "... good character" can be eliminated.
Try this:
<b>Only while following the path of God will we develop good character, which should be reflected in all our actions.</b>
(But I'm just guessing about what you mean by "holding any task.")
In the rest, the repetition of "... good character" can be eliminated.
Try this:
<b>Only while following the path of God will we develop good character, which should be reflected in all our actions.</b>
(But I'm just guessing about what you mean by "holding any task.")
GuruBlue
Good character is a requirement for every task we perform.