English Language Arts IV B Unit 4 lesson 7 Writing Conventions Quick Check

Use the sentence to answer the question.

Original sentence: But no one can dispute the impact of Michael Jordan on sports and popular culture.

Which proposed edit correctly addresses the conjunction used at the beginning of the original sentence?

A. No one can dispute the impact of Michael Jordan on sports and popular culture.

B. Although there are many impressive athletes today, no one can dispute the impact of Michael Jordan on sports and popular culture.

C. No one can dispute the impact of Michael Jordan, however, on sports and popular culture.

D. There are many impressive athletes today, but no one can dispute the impact of Michael Jordan on sports and popular culture.

1 answer

The original sentence starts with "But," which is often considered informal or unnecessary in formal writing. The proposed edits aim to correct the use of the conjunction at the beginning of the sentence.

The best choice that properly addresses this issue is:

A. No one can dispute the impact of Michael Jordan on sports and popular culture.

This option removes the conjunction altogether, making the sentence more formal and direct.