The missing element from the thesis statement is reasons. While the statement does present a claim about focusing anti-pollution efforts on privately owned cars, it does not provide specific reasons or evidence to support that claim. A stronger thesis statement would include reasons explaining why focusing on privately owned cars is effective or beneficial.
What is missing from the following thesis statement? America's anti-pollution efforts should focus on privately owned cars because it would allow most citizens to contribute to national efforts and care about the outcome.
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