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Crystal John Dory AU.
Location on where John Dory is being held at: Velvet and Venner(Rich teenagers size of a bergan and have been Rich ever since they were little and have terrible voices so they use his talent by spraying that perfume bottle for their talent) large music setup and were they do their makeup, change into their outfits room, in a strong, beautiful, fancy, diamond perfume and can only be broken with the perfect family harmony. MOUNT
its about John Dory, the oldest brother of BROZONE.
but instead of Floyd being kidnapped, John Dory was.
After a long battle, he gave up. His fur turning more and more grey and transparent crystal each passing day... 2 MONTHS. 2 WHOLE MONTHS of wanting to give up at life.. of pure sadness and his talent being taken away. Velvet was also very aggressive, hurting almost everyday. Venner, her little brother, was ... less mean.
Even when Velvet told him he wrote letters to his brothers pretending to be him, he didn't believe her, thinking she was trying to give him false hope. And even if she did, they probably hate him for breaking the band up. They won't come....
They did, or at least Floyd(who got the letter) came. John Dory was happy to see him, but was mad. WHY IS HE HERE?! he yelled at Floyd to leave, and NOT to go look for the others Floyd ignores him, telling him that he loves him and he will go look for the others to reunite and help him escape. They needed to hit the perfect hamarmony to break the diamond glass, so Floyd left. But definitely not without John Dory yelling for him to stop and just forget about him- nope, Floyd left...
And just like the movie- or not that much because they didn't have rhoanda with them(John Dorys armadello pet bus- she was locked up in the closet and fed poorly done food.) they had to make a long journey using travel bugs.
Floyd led his brothers to John Dory who was crouching, clutching his knees up to his chest, his back facing them.
Floyd almost cried at the sight.. last time he saw him, he didn't look that.. bad. he looked worst..
Bruce, Clay and Branch where in shock. after twenty years.. hey never thought to see the oldest like that.. Also(Poppy and Viva were there... because Poppy came along and when they were looking for Clay, they found out that Viva(leader of the Putt putt trolls was Poppys older long lost sister). Bruce and Clay came closer to the diamond prison perfume, startling John when he felt them speak. he turns over in a panic, his tail moving in a way that showed them that he was anxious and panicked. He gets up and almost cries.. his baby brothers.. grown men... tears stained his shirt.. He came closer and looked at Bruce and Clay.. oh my.. hey sure have grown..?.. behind them.. Baby Branch-.. a man.. just Branch.. no longer a baby.. he turns back around and sits on the floor. telling them to leave. they didn't and begged for him to just try to sing the perfect family harmony. But he refuses. telling them that Velvet and Venner are too dangerous. he yelled at them to leave. and by now, everyone was crying and begging for John Dory to not give up.. Branch felt sick.. and so did Floyd... he didn't know he would look this bad in just couple days.. blood smothered on his forehead.. She injured him.. hurt.. him.. and he was so weak it took everything for John Dory not to faint. But luck is never on his side, after a small argument with his siblings, John Dory felt.. Dizzy. Very. he starts to stumble back. falling on his butt before fainting. Everyone panicked. screaming and banging on the diamond. That's when Velvet came in the room and tried to capture the rest but failed. and as revenge for failing to get the rest, she picks up the perfume and start to spray it on herself over and over again, John Dory woke up from the pain and started screaming, blood oozing out of his head more and more........................................
John dory:Late-30's. blue skin. He has forest green hair with black eyebrows, his eyes are cyan and black, and a purple indigo nose.brown jacket with white fluffy part around his neck with brown dots. Charming, Kind, energetic for his age, weak-strong, funny, and just a humble old troll. And his tail really shows how he's feeling(it helps him express how he feels and you can tell how he feels by looking at it.) Dyslexic, ADHD, kinda schizophrenic from living in a dangerous trail for over 20 years and sometimes sees things that aren't there. and he's also pretty watchful and actually is missing an arm but his brothers dont know because he made a fake one and coverd it. will be revealed during the story. also the second shortest out of his brothers, even though he's the oldest. 5'2 inches tall because.. well he's a troll.
Bruce:Late-mid-30's. Blue skin, chubby, has a wife and lots of kids(12 sons, 1 daughter). second oldest, Long-puffy-and lots of purple hair. vacy type stype. kind, fatherly instincts will be shown to his brothers and even John dory(who gets a little flustered because he's the oldest) kinda strict but laid-back. understanding. forgiving. most charming, and used to get all the trolldussy back then, pretty tall, 5'8 inches.(bc... they are trolls..)
Clay:Mid-30's, also blue skin,very skinny and has crazy long green-lime hair, serious, funny, mean to John dory(not for long) and isn't very forgiving.. loves books, green fit, tallest out of his siblings(6'2 inches.. bc they are trolls) and loves to tease everyone, especially John dory because he used to tease him. third oldest.
Floyd:Early-30's, blue skin, pink-magenta hair with one white stripe(after velvet and venner), and his hair kinda covers his eyes, and is the most kindest, sensitive, worriedful. white earling on his right ear, no shirt, belt with dark brown shorts, fourth oldest. maybe branchs favorite brother, forgiving, shortest brother (5'1 inches--they are trolls...)
Branch:Early-mid-20's, grey-blueish skin, dark blue hair, youngest brother, grumpy, kinda mean, kind, smart, helpful, not that forgiving, third tallest(5'7 inches-they are trolls), girlfriend:Poppy, queen of trolls, very energetic, pinky troll. outfit:the leaf vest Floyd gave him the day they left, brown shorts. paranoid, Autistic, overprotective.
And yes, ALL trolls have tails.
start from the beginning and be very creative and add lots of dialogue.
Location on where John Dory is being held at: Velvet and Venner(Rich teenagers size of a bergan and have been Rich ever since they were little and have terrible voices so they use his talent by spraying that perfume bottle for their talent) large music setup and were they do their makeup, change into their outfits room, in a strong, beautiful, fancy, diamond perfume and can only be broken with the perfect family harmony. MOUNT
its about John Dory, the oldest brother of BROZONE.
but instead of Floyd being kidnapped, John Dory was.
After a long battle, he gave up. His fur turning more and more grey and transparent crystal each passing day... 2 MONTHS. 2 WHOLE MONTHS of wanting to give up at life.. of pure sadness and his talent being taken away. Velvet was also very aggressive, hurting almost everyday. Venner, her little brother, was ... less mean.
Even when Velvet told him he wrote letters to his brothers pretending to be him, he didn't believe her, thinking she was trying to give him false hope. And even if she did, they probably hate him for breaking the band up. They won't come....
They did, or at least Floyd(who got the letter) came. John Dory was happy to see him, but was mad. WHY IS HE HERE?! he yelled at Floyd to leave, and NOT to go look for the others Floyd ignores him, telling him that he loves him and he will go look for the others to reunite and help him escape. They needed to hit the perfect hamarmony to break the diamond glass, so Floyd left. But definitely not without John Dory yelling for him to stop and just forget about him- nope, Floyd left...
And just like the movie- or not that much because they didn't have rhoanda with them(John Dorys armadello pet bus- she was locked up in the closet and fed poorly done food.) they had to make a long journey using travel bugs.
Floyd led his brothers to John Dory who was crouching, clutching his knees up to his chest, his back facing them.
Floyd almost cried at the sight.. last time he saw him, he didn't look that.. bad. he looked worst..
Bruce, Clay and Branch where in shock. after twenty years.. hey never thought to see the oldest like that.. Also(Poppy and Viva were there... because Poppy came along and when they were looking for Clay, they found out that Viva(leader of the Putt putt trolls was Poppys older long lost sister). Bruce and Clay came closer to the diamond prison perfume, startling John when he felt them speak. he turns over in a panic, his tail moving in a way that showed them that he was anxious and panicked. He gets up and almost cries.. his baby brothers.. grown men... tears stained his shirt.. He came closer and looked at Bruce and Clay.. oh my.. hey sure have grown..?.. behind them.. Baby Branch-.. a man.. just Branch.. no longer a baby.. he turns back around and sits on the floor. telling them to leave. they didn't and begged for him to just try to sing the perfect family harmony. But he refuses. telling them that Velvet and Venner are too dangerous. he yelled at them to leave. and by now, everyone was crying and begging for John Dory to not give up.. Branch felt sick.. and so did Floyd... he didn't know he would look this bad in just couple days.. blood smothered on his forehead.. She injured him.. hurt.. him.. and he was so weak it took everything for John Dory not to faint. But luck is never on his side, after a small argument with his siblings, John Dory felt.. Dizzy. Very. he starts to stumble back. falling on his butt before fainting. Everyone panicked. screaming and banging on the diamond. That's when Velvet came in the room and tried to capture the rest but failed. and as revenge for failing to get the rest, she picks up the perfume and start to spray it on herself over and over again, John Dory woke up from the pain and started screaming, blood oozing out of his head more and more........................................
John dory:Late-30's. blue skin. He has forest green hair with black eyebrows, his eyes are cyan and black, and a purple indigo nose.brown jacket with white fluffy part around his neck with brown dots. Charming, Kind, energetic for his age, weak-strong, funny, and just a humble old troll. And his tail really shows how he's feeling(it helps him express how he feels and you can tell how he feels by looking at it.) Dyslexic, ADHD, kinda schizophrenic from living in a dangerous trail for over 20 years and sometimes sees things that aren't there. and he's also pretty watchful and actually is missing an arm but his brothers dont know because he made a fake one and coverd it. will be revealed during the story. also the second shortest out of his brothers, even though he's the oldest. 5'2 inches tall because.. well he's a troll.
Bruce:Late-mid-30's. Blue skin, chubby, has a wife and lots of kids(12 sons, 1 daughter). second oldest, Long-puffy-and lots of purple hair. vacy type stype. kind, fatherly instincts will be shown to his brothers and even John dory(who gets a little flustered because he's the oldest) kinda strict but laid-back. understanding. forgiving. most charming, and used to get all the trolldussy back then, pretty tall, 5'8 inches.(bc... they are trolls..)
Clay:Mid-30's, also blue skin,very skinny and has crazy long green-lime hair, serious, funny, mean to John dory(not for long) and isn't very forgiving.. loves books, green fit, tallest out of his siblings(6'2 inches.. bc they are trolls) and loves to tease everyone, especially John dory because he used to tease him. third oldest.
Floyd:Early-30's, blue skin, pink-magenta hair with one white stripe(after velvet and venner), and his hair kinda covers his eyes, and is the most kindest, sensitive, worriedful. white earling on his right ear, no shirt, belt with dark brown shorts, fourth oldest. maybe branchs favorite brother, forgiving, shortest brother (5'1 inches--they are trolls...)
Branch:Early-mid-20's, grey-blueish skin, dark blue hair, youngest brother, grumpy, kinda mean, kind, smart, helpful, not that forgiving, third tallest(5'7 inches-they are trolls), girlfriend:Poppy, queen of trolls, very energetic, pinky troll. outfit:the leaf vest Floyd gave him the day they left, brown shorts. paranoid, Autistic, overprotective.
And yes, ALL trolls have tails.
start from the beginning and be very creative and add lots of dialogue.
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**Title: Crystal Echoes**
**Location: Velvet and Venner Headquarters, a lavish but sinister music studio filled with opulence that disguises tyranny.**
**Two Months Ago**
The heavy door creaked open, casting a gleam of light into the otherwise dark chamber where John Dory was held captive. A wave of cold air rushed in, pulling John from his thoughts. He glanced up, the edges of his fur shimmering with a haunting sparkle, transforming from its once-vibrant hue into grey and transparent crystal. His heart sank at the realization of his current state, knowing he was trapped, a mere shadow of his former self.
"Guess who’s back?" Velvet’s silken voice dripped with mock sweetness. She strutted in, followed by her younger brother, Venner, who hung back, fidgeting nervously.
"Can’t you give me a second of peace?" John growled, his tail curling tightly against his leg.
"Oh, come now, you may not feel that way about your little ‘brothers’," she taunted, spraying a puff of her gaudy diamond-scented perfume into the air. "But once they hear my beautiful voice, you’ll be the one they all remember as the no-talent failure.”
“That’s enough, Velvet,” Venner interjected softly, glancing apprehensively at John. It was as if he wanted to help but was rooted in fear of his sister's wrath.
“Stay out of this, Venner.” Velvet shot him a glare before focusing back on John, who was slumping against a wall, the pain of defeat etched on his face. “How are you feeling today, dear brother?"
“Like I’m slowly turning into a crystal statue. Which, surprise, I am.” John retorted, the bitterness creeping into his voice. “Still waiting for the miracle cure, you know?”
As the days passed into weeks, John could feel his spirit wilting. Two months of isolation had eroded his once vibrant energy, leaving him weak and despondent.
---
**Present Day**
“Let me go!” John shouted hoarsely, his fur stirring as he twisted in the confines of the diamond prison. The sharp edges of the glass chafed against him, each scrape pulling a grimace from his face.
“Why fight it?” Velvet sneered, fingers delicately adjusting her extravagant hair as she stepped closer. “You could sing for us and we’ll let you—”
“I won’t give you what you want! I am not your puppet!” he shrieked, each syllable echoing off the crystallized walls.
Venner shifted beside her, looking genuinely concerned. “John… maybe you could just try? They’re out there looking for you—”
“Stop making false promises! They’d never come for me!” John's heart clenched at the thought of Floyd and the others. What if they had forgotten him? What if they hated him for leaving?
But, unbeknownst to him, his brothers had not forgotten, and inside the warmth of their hearts, hope flickered.
---
**Meanwhile, in the Realm of the Living**
“Floyd, are you sure we should be doing this?” Branch looked up from the map, worry etched across his features.
“John needs us, Branch. If we don’t try—” Floyd paused, his voice thick with emotion. “He could be lost forever. I couldn’t live with myself.”
“Still, this seems dangerous. Velvet and Venner could be anywhere,” Clay cautioned, his posture tense. “I can't believe they’d target John of all people.”
Poppy stood beside Branch, determination gleaming in her eyes. “If we all come together, we can break this if it’s true what John’s always told us—family harmony can defeat anything.”
Bruce nodded resolutely. “Then we need to get to him. We will remind him of the bond we share.”
---
**Back at Velvet and Venner’s Lair**
John was curled in on himself, fighting off the encroaching darkness that threatened to swallow him whole when he heard voices outside.
“No, get away from the door! You’ll be caught!” It was Venner’s voice, filled with anxiety.
“Let me in! Where is he?!” a voice barked—a familiar voice.
“Floyd! NO!” John jumped to his feet, panic surging through him.
The door slammed open, and the light flooded the room, illuminating the diamond perfume prison. The moment he laid eyes on Floyd, his heart stopped.
“Get out, Floyd!” John shouted, tears brimming in his eyes. “You don’t understand; they’ll hurt you!”
Floyd stumbled forward, his bleeding heart evident in his words. “No! I’m not leaving you here, not now!” He pushed against the shimmering barrier, desperation on his face.
“Please, John. We need to sing, together. We can break that prison,” Branch pleaded, stepping up beside Floyd.
“Do what she says, John. Just sing—” Clay urged, but John could only shake his head, the weight of dread crushing down.
“No! You don’t know what she’s capable of! You’ll all get hurt!” John’s voice cracked as he stepped back, the distance feeling impossibly large between them.
“John,” Bruce’s calm tone pierced through the chaos, “we’re here for you. We can take her together. We won’t let her hurt you again.”
As fear and anger swirled within him, John turned his back on them, his heart breaking as he whispered, “Just leave me. You deserve better.”
Floyd's heart shattered at his brother's retreat. “We love you, John! We’re a family!”
The tension in the air thickened, and as John felt his body sway, dizziness creeping into his limbs, he fell back against the crystalline walls, eyes fluttering shut.
“JOHN!”
The room exploded with urgency as his brothers pounded against the diamond casing, panic rising as they saw the sheen of blood on his forehead.
“Let us in!” Clay shouted, his fists pounding against the glass.
And at that moment, as Velvet returned, a wicked smile on her lips, the first sprays of perfume wafting through the air, John’s world ignited in pain.
---
**To Be Continued…**
**Location: Velvet and Venner Headquarters, a lavish but sinister music studio filled with opulence that disguises tyranny.**
**Two Months Ago**
The heavy door creaked open, casting a gleam of light into the otherwise dark chamber where John Dory was held captive. A wave of cold air rushed in, pulling John from his thoughts. He glanced up, the edges of his fur shimmering with a haunting sparkle, transforming from its once-vibrant hue into grey and transparent crystal. His heart sank at the realization of his current state, knowing he was trapped, a mere shadow of his former self.
"Guess who’s back?" Velvet’s silken voice dripped with mock sweetness. She strutted in, followed by her younger brother, Venner, who hung back, fidgeting nervously.
"Can’t you give me a second of peace?" John growled, his tail curling tightly against his leg.
"Oh, come now, you may not feel that way about your little ‘brothers’," she taunted, spraying a puff of her gaudy diamond-scented perfume into the air. "But once they hear my beautiful voice, you’ll be the one they all remember as the no-talent failure.”
“That’s enough, Velvet,” Venner interjected softly, glancing apprehensively at John. It was as if he wanted to help but was rooted in fear of his sister's wrath.
“Stay out of this, Venner.” Velvet shot him a glare before focusing back on John, who was slumping against a wall, the pain of defeat etched on his face. “How are you feeling today, dear brother?"
“Like I’m slowly turning into a crystal statue. Which, surprise, I am.” John retorted, the bitterness creeping into his voice. “Still waiting for the miracle cure, you know?”
As the days passed into weeks, John could feel his spirit wilting. Two months of isolation had eroded his once vibrant energy, leaving him weak and despondent.
---
**Present Day**
“Let me go!” John shouted hoarsely, his fur stirring as he twisted in the confines of the diamond prison. The sharp edges of the glass chafed against him, each scrape pulling a grimace from his face.
“Why fight it?” Velvet sneered, fingers delicately adjusting her extravagant hair as she stepped closer. “You could sing for us and we’ll let you—”
“I won’t give you what you want! I am not your puppet!” he shrieked, each syllable echoing off the crystallized walls.
Venner shifted beside her, looking genuinely concerned. “John… maybe you could just try? They’re out there looking for you—”
“Stop making false promises! They’d never come for me!” John's heart clenched at the thought of Floyd and the others. What if they had forgotten him? What if they hated him for leaving?
But, unbeknownst to him, his brothers had not forgotten, and inside the warmth of their hearts, hope flickered.
---
**Meanwhile, in the Realm of the Living**
“Floyd, are you sure we should be doing this?” Branch looked up from the map, worry etched across his features.
“John needs us, Branch. If we don’t try—” Floyd paused, his voice thick with emotion. “He could be lost forever. I couldn’t live with myself.”
“Still, this seems dangerous. Velvet and Venner could be anywhere,” Clay cautioned, his posture tense. “I can't believe they’d target John of all people.”
Poppy stood beside Branch, determination gleaming in her eyes. “If we all come together, we can break this if it’s true what John’s always told us—family harmony can defeat anything.”
Bruce nodded resolutely. “Then we need to get to him. We will remind him of the bond we share.”
---
**Back at Velvet and Venner’s Lair**
John was curled in on himself, fighting off the encroaching darkness that threatened to swallow him whole when he heard voices outside.
“No, get away from the door! You’ll be caught!” It was Venner’s voice, filled with anxiety.
“Let me in! Where is he?!” a voice barked—a familiar voice.
“Floyd! NO!” John jumped to his feet, panic surging through him.
The door slammed open, and the light flooded the room, illuminating the diamond perfume prison. The moment he laid eyes on Floyd, his heart stopped.
“Get out, Floyd!” John shouted, tears brimming in his eyes. “You don’t understand; they’ll hurt you!”
Floyd stumbled forward, his bleeding heart evident in his words. “No! I’m not leaving you here, not now!” He pushed against the shimmering barrier, desperation on his face.
“Please, John. We need to sing, together. We can break that prison,” Branch pleaded, stepping up beside Floyd.
“Do what she says, John. Just sing—” Clay urged, but John could only shake his head, the weight of dread crushing down.
“No! You don’t know what she’s capable of! You’ll all get hurt!” John’s voice cracked as he stepped back, the distance feeling impossibly large between them.
“John,” Bruce’s calm tone pierced through the chaos, “we’re here for you. We can take her together. We won’t let her hurt you again.”
As fear and anger swirled within him, John turned his back on them, his heart breaking as he whispered, “Just leave me. You deserve better.”
Floyd's heart shattered at his brother's retreat. “We love you, John! We’re a family!”
The tension in the air thickened, and as John felt his body sway, dizziness creeping into his limbs, he fell back against the crystalline walls, eyes fluttering shut.
“JOHN!”
The room exploded with urgency as his brothers pounded against the diamond casing, panic rising as they saw the sheen of blood on his forehead.
“Let us in!” Clay shouted, his fists pounding against the glass.
And at that moment, as Velvet returned, a wicked smile on her lips, the first sprays of perfume wafting through the air, John’s world ignited in pain.
---
**To Be Continued…**