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1-Introductory Sentence
2-Evidence #1
3-Analysis #1
4-Evidence #2
5-Analysis #2
6-Concluding Sentence

Thesis Statement: In the article “The Kitty Genovese Murder: What Really Happened” by Jessica Mcbirney. You learn that on march 13, 1964 a women was stalked and murdered outside of her apartment with around 37-38 people in the area where she was killed, but none of the people did anything to help her. Why did none of the people help her, how did her murder affect society. Here you will learn those questions .
Evidence #1The bystander effect is how or when people make decisions about getting involved with conflict. Kittys murder was called the murder that helped create the emergency line “911”.
Analysis #1“I didn’t want to get involved.” here is the quote from the passage

Most people dont want to get “involved” if they see something bad happening. So they just run or sit there and watch something bad going on and do nothing.

Evidence #2:The media portrayed that her murder was a tragedy because there were 37 people and all 37 people failed to act but. The media lied about what happened. Kitty did not die alone and the police were called before she died. Kitty died in th ambulance on route to the hospital

A. M. Rosenthal, editor of the New York Times when the article first ran, chooses to put the faulty
reporting in a larger context: “I can’t swear... there were 37 people... What was true: people all over the world were affected by it. Did it do anything? You bet your eye it did something. And I’m glad it did.”
Analysis #2: You cant always trust what the media says the media dosnt always tell the truth, most people dont do there own research after reading something that the media lied about, And the people dont even know they lied. When the media said that no one helped kitty that was a lie but most of the people who read it believed what was said.
Concluding Statement:In conclusion Tragedy dosnt affect most people because they dont want to get involved in it. But what those people can do to when tragedy strikes is. They can work together, like if someone is getting mugged on a crowded street they could all tackle the robber down and call the cops. I know people are afraid of getting hurt in most situations but think about the other person they could be getting hurt so use that fear to help you help other people

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1. Introductory Sentence: In the article “The Kitty Genovese Murder: What Really Happened” by Jessica McBirney, you learn that on March 13, 1964, a woman was stalked and murdered outside of her apartment with around 37-38 people in the area where she was killed, but none of the people did anything to help her.

2. Evidence #1: The bystander effect is when people make decisions about getting involved in conflicts. Kitty's murder was called the murder that helped create the emergency line “911.”

3. Analysis #1: “I didn’t want to get involved.” This quote from the passage illustrates that most people don't want to get “involved” if they see something bad happening. They often just run away or sit by and do nothing.

4. Evidence #2: The media portrayed her murder as a tragedy because there were 37 people present, and all 37 people failed to act. However, the media lied about what happened. Kitty did not die alone, and the police were called before she died. Kitty died in the ambulance on the way to the hospital. A. M. Rosenthal, editor of the New York Times when the article first ran, puts the faulty reporting in a larger context: “I can’t swear... there were 37 people... What was true: people all over the world were affected by it. Did it do anything? You bet your eye it did something. And I’m glad it did.”

5. Analysis #2: You can't always trust what the media says; they don't always tell the truth. Most people don't do their own research after reading something that the media misreported, and they remain unaware of the inaccuracies. When the media claimed that no one helped Kitty, that was a lie, but most people who read it believed what was said.

6. Concluding Statement: In conclusion, tragedy doesn't affect most people because they don’t want to get involved. However, when tragedy strikes, people can work together; for instance, if someone is getting mugged on a crowded street, they could all tackle the robber and call the police. I know people are afraid of getting hurt in such situations, but they should think about the potential victim who could be hurt and use that fear to motivate them to help others.