The two most effective ways to organize Jonas's story would be:
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Begin just before the second race, with a flashback to the first race, followed by a scene describing the second race.
This approach builds immediate tension as readers are drawn into the current race, while the flashback provides crucial context and emotional background. -
Begin with the first race, followed by many scenes from the year in between, and end with a scene describing the second race.
This structure allows for a deeper exploration of Jonas's character development and the challenges he faced throughout the year, leading up to his victory in the second race.
These two options create a balanced narrative flow that highlights both the past loss and the eventual triumph.