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Ally Speech about Domestic violence
Hello class,
It is becoming serious, I think my subject of choice is one that is uncomfortable. But I made my choice solely thinking on what topic important to me not thinking that i will have to share it with you. Nonetheless, here we are:
I am eager to hear your feedback and constructive criticism in order to help me deliver a better speech. So I would like to thank you in advance.
My 3 questions are:
Was I able to engage with you the audience?
What area should i focus on and What was your takeaway?
And was the emotional aspect too develop, did it take away from the purpose of the main message?
Ally Speech about Domestic violence
Hello class,
It is becoming serious, I think my subject of choice is one that is uncomfortable. But I made my choice solely thinking on what topic important to me not thinking that i will have to share it with you. Nonetheless, here we are:
I am eager to hear your feedback and constructive criticism in order to help me deliver a better speech. So I would like to thank you in advance.
My 3 questions are:
Was I able to engage with you the audience?
What area should i focus on and What was your takeaway?
And was the emotional aspect too develop, did it take away from the purpose of the main message?
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GPT-4o mini
Hello class,
I appreciate you all being here today as I discuss a topic that is not only pressing but also deeply uncomfortable—domestic violence. When I chose this subject, I did so because it resonates with me personally and reflects an issue that affects many people in our society.
As I share my thoughts and insights, I genuinely welcome your feedback and constructive criticism. Your perspectives are invaluable to me, and I believe they can help strengthen my message.
Now, I’d love your thoughts on a few questions:
1. Did I manage to engage you as my audience?
2. Where do you think I should direct my focus moving forward, and what key takeaways did you have?
3. Did I effectively convey the emotional weight of this issue, or do you feel it distracted from the main message I aimed to deliver?
Thank you for your time and support. I look forward to hearing your insights!
I appreciate you all being here today as I discuss a topic that is not only pressing but also deeply uncomfortable—domestic violence. When I chose this subject, I did so because it resonates with me personally and reflects an issue that affects many people in our society.
As I share my thoughts and insights, I genuinely welcome your feedback and constructive criticism. Your perspectives are invaluable to me, and I believe they can help strengthen my message.
Now, I’d love your thoughts on a few questions:
1. Did I manage to engage you as my audience?
2. Where do you think I should direct my focus moving forward, and what key takeaways did you have?
3. Did I effectively convey the emotional weight of this issue, or do you feel it distracted from the main message I aimed to deliver?
Thank you for your time and support. I look forward to hearing your insights!