9B Narrative Portfolio

Creative Writing: “The Reader”
Grading Rubric
Assignment Instructions:
Read the short passage “The Reader.”
Imagine how the story might continue after Jorge enters the secret passageway and write an ending to this story using the criteria listed below. (You may use the graphic organizer under these instructions for help, but you do NOT have to turn this in.) Your story must be TYPED in a Google document. (Do NOT copy & paste.) Use these instructions if you are not sure how to sign in to your school Google account. Per school policy, all writing assignments must now be completed in a Google Doc or in Google Slides. No other formats will be accepted. Any assignments submitted in a format other than a Google Docs or Google Slides link will temporarily receive a zero until the link is submitted.
It is ok to use AI to help generate ideas for your story like you did last semester, but the majority of the story should be written in your own words. Your narrative should be no more than 25% written by AI.
When you have finished writing, copy & paste your story into the discussion text box as your initial post. Use these instructions on how to complete a discussion assignment if you need help.
In the Unit 2 Lesson 6 Discussion, you will be receiving feedback about your story from your classmates. When you get to Unit 3 Lesson 1, view the feedback left for you in the Discussion threads and revise your story as needed.
In Unit 3 Lesson 2, submit the link to the final draft of your story to the assessment at the end of the lesson. Make sure the share settings are set to “Anyone with the link can EDIT” so your teachers can make comments, if necessary. Use these instructions if you need help with your share settings.
Requirements/Writer’s Checklist:
❏ Use 3rd Person Point of View - Remember, you are speaking as the narrator, so use 3rd person pronouns like “he” and “his.”
❏ Your story should be 1-2 pages (double-spaced) and should include the following:
❏ Setting- Use sensory language to describe where the passageway leads.
❏ Characterization- Create at least one character Jorge meets. Use sensory language & be descriptive!
❏ Dialogue- Include a conversation between Jorge and the new character. (Must have at least 4 lines of dialogue, properly punctuated.)
❏ Resolution & Conclusion- How does the story end?
❏ Use active voice. Avoid using too many being verbs like is, was, were, etc.
❏ 3 paragraphs minimum (1- 2 pages, double-spaced)
❏ Use proper spelling and conventions, including MLA Format.
Help Resources:
MLA Google Template
Portfolio Help Video
Punctuating Dialogue Help
Sensory Word List
Extra Credit:
To earn extra credit, include a drawing of the setting and/or the new character Jorge meets OR create a collage of pictures that represent the setting and/or the new character. (Google Images is a great place to find pictures to use in your collage.) Submit your drawing or collage to the drop box along with your narrative.


Narrative Writing Outline
A narrative is a spoken or written account of a series of connected events; in other words, a story.
Beginning
(In the climax of the story, Jorge is trapped in the secret passageway.)
Setting- Where does the secret passageway lead?
Describe the setting using sensory language.

...Jorge began walking away from his bedroom, away from his armchair and the comfort of his home. Each step took him farther into the dark and mysterious tunnel.
Begin Your Story Here…Jorge stands in the narrow passageway, the dim light barely illuminating the crumbling stone walls. Shadows dance around him, creating an eerie atmosphere.



Characterization- Create at least one character Jorge meets. Use sensory language in your description.


Middle
(In the falling action, what steps do Jorge & the new character take to overcome the conflict?)
Action- What do Jorge & the new character do? Use active voice.




Dialogue- Include a conversation between Jorge and the new character. (Must have at least 4 lines of dialogue & must use correct punctuation for dialogue.)

End
(In the resolution, how is the conflict resolved? You MUST have a resolution. No cliffhangers!)
Resolution- How is the conflict resolved? Does Jorge go back home?



Conclusion- How does the story end? What has Jorge learned from this experience?

1 answer

The Reader: A Continuation

Jorge stands in the narrow passageway, the dim light barely illuminating the crumbling stone walls. Shadows dance around him, creating an eerie atmosphere. The air feels thick and damp, clinging to his skin like a second layer of clothing. He can hear the faint drip of water echoing somewhere deep within the tunnel, a steady reminder that he is not alone in this ancient labyrinth. As he ventures further, the walls twist and widen, revealing a hidden chamber that glimmers with a faint, azure light.

The light emanates from a pool of crystal-clear water that shimmers like liquid glass. Surrounding the pool, lush foliage thrives—vibrant moss, ferns, and flowers adorned with luminescent petals bloom in shades of violet and blue. It is a breathtaking sight, as if nature itself had decided to shelter this secluded nook. As Jorge steps closer, the surface of the water ripples, and he catches a glimpse of movement. From behind a large rock formation, a figure emerges.

“Who dares enter the Sanctuary of the Waters?” a voice challenges, rich and melodic. Jorge’s heart races as he meets the gaze of a young woman, her long, intertwined hair cascading like waves. She wears a flowing garment that glimmers like the water itself, and her deep green eyes study him with curiosity.

“Um, it’s just me,” Jorge stumbles, his voice trembling slightly. “I’m Jorge. I didn’t mean to intrude. I’m looking for… something.”

“Something?” she echoing, a smile dancing on her lips. “What could be worth such a perilous journey? Most have an easier path.”

“I’m not sure,” Jorge admits, “but I felt compelled to explore this passage. I thought it might lead to something meaningful, some kind of hidden knowledge.”

The girl steps closer, the enchanting light reflecting in her eyes. “Knowledge is vast and can be dangerous. But if you seek it, you must prove your worth. You must answer three questions posed by the Waters.”

“Three questions?” Jorge asked, intrigued. “What if I fail?”

“Failure has its lessons, but success opens doors,” she replied confidently. “Are you ready?”

Jorge nodded, determination surging through him. “I’m ready.”

The woman raised her arms, her fingers grazing the surface of the water, which began to bubble and churn. “First question: What is the greatest treasure one can possess?”

Without hesitating, Jorge responded, “To know oneself and embrace one’s true nature.”

A ripple flowed through the pool, and a soft glow enveloped Jorge. The woman's eyes sparkled. “Correct. Second question: What binds people together?”

“Stories,” he said, recalling the tales his grandmother used to tell. “Stories connect us, transcending time and distance.”

The water shimmered again, brighter this time. “Indeed. Final question: What is the essence of hope?”

Jorge paused, contemplating. The answer surged within him like a tidal wave of understanding. “Hope is the light that guides us through darkness, the belief that something better lies ahead.”

The pool erupted in a dazzling array of colors, and the woman clapped her hands in delight. “You have done it, Jorge! You are worthy. The Sanctuary will grant you one vision—what you seek most in your heart.”

With a deep breath, Jorge stepped forward. The waters undulated, forming images of his loved ones, their faces full of joy. He saw himself surrounded by friends, feeling fulfilled and at peace. It was a moment of clarity, revealing that what he truly sought was connection—a sense of belonging in a world that often felt vast and lonely.

As the vision faded, Jorge turned to the woman, gratitude lighting up his features. “Thank you. I finally understand what I was searching for.”

She nodded, her expression softening. “Remember, Jorge, every journey bears a lesson. Now, return home with your newfound knowledge.”

Jorge felt a gentle pull, like an invisible thread weaving him back through the passageway. He walked away from the enchanting chamber, the shadows no longer intimidating but comforting, as if they were guiding him back to the warmth of the light.

Emerging from the passage, Jorge stepped back into his room, the scent of the air fresh and inviting. He smiled, a sense of purpose coursing through him. Facing his bookshelf overflowing with stories, he knew he would share the truths he had discovered with others. It was time to share. It was time to connect.

And so, Jorge learned that the greatest stories are not just those written in books but those forged in experience, waiting to be told.

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