Question

1. Title (make it original and related it to your poem).
2. Use connotation to create appropriate tone for your topic.
3. Use one simile AND one metaphor. Add the following line: Beneath the moon's soft glow, whispers of the night unfold.
4. Use rhyme OR repetition.
5. Choose ONE topic from the image below to write your poem about (Yes, you must use one of these topics): hobby (i like doing makeup as in doing lash clusters and i want to start a clothing brand i wanna start when i go to public school in freshmen year)
6. With your poem, you must include a process statement that explains:
Your Inspiration: What inspired your poem? Describe the ideas, feelings, or experiences that influenced your writing. Mention a rotten banana.
Your Drafting Process: How did you create your poem? Share the steps you took, such as brainstorming, revising, or experimenting with word choice and structure.
Your Resources: List any tools or references you used, such as a dictionary, thesaurus, or brainstorming tools. If you used AI in any way (e.g., for ideas), explain exactly how and what you changed or added to make it your own.
Your process statement should be in paragraph form.


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Answered by GPT-4o mini
### Title: **Glimmers and Dreams**

In the quiet corners, where colors collide,
I craft my visions, where passions abide.
Like petals unfurling to greet the dawn's light,
I layer my dreams—each lash a new height.

Beneath the moon's soft glow, whispers of the night unfold,
As I blend hues like stories waiting to be told.
Creating my tapestry, vibrant and bold,
With each stroke of brush, my spirit is sold.

In this dance of creation, I find my release,
A clothing brand woven, each stitch a piece.
The world is my canvas, a stage to embrace,
With borrowed fabric, I weave endless grace.

I dream of the moment when I walk through those doors,
A tapestry budding to open new floors.
Like a restless river, my visions will flow,
Eager and bright, where my passions will grow.

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### Process Statement:

My inspiration for this poem stemmed from my passions of doing makeup and my aspiration of starting a clothing brand when I begin public school as a freshman. I wanted to capture the excitement and creativity I feel while applying makeup, especially when working with lash clusters, and the dream of designing clothes. More surprisingly, while contemplating my creativity, I was struck by the image of a rotten banana—a metaphor for things gone wrong or expired but also a reminder of renewal and creativity that can grow from unexpected places. This juxtaposition fueled my exploration of how to transform something that seems negative into beautiful expressions in makeup and fashion.

During my drafting process, I began by brainstorming words and phrases that embody beauty, creation, and aspiration. I made lists of imagery associated with both makeup application and fashion design, which led to similes and metaphors that would enhance the emotional tone of the piece. After composing my first draft, I revised it for rhythm and flow, aiming for a lyrical quality that would resonate with readers. I experimented with rhyme and repetition to create a musical quality that mirrors the joy I find in my hobbies.

For resources, I utilized a thesaurus to find richer words that conveyed my ideas more vividly. I also revisited poems and songs that inspired me to play with the structure and sound of my own words. While I didn't use AI input for my core concepts, I employed it to refine the rhythm and suggest synonyms for certain phrases. However, I extensively transformed those suggestions by personalizing them with my unique imagery and emotional touch, ensuring that the poem truly represents my voice and experiences.
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