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give me a long summary about my story and add details.
Location on where John Dory is being held at: Velvet and Venner(Rich teenagers size of a bergan and have been Rich every since they where little and have terrible voices so they use his talent by spraying that perfume bottle for their talent) large music setup and were they do their makeup, change into their outfits room, in a strong, beautiful, fancy, diamond perfume and can only be broken with the perfect family harmony.
its about John Dory, the oldest brother of BROZONE.
but instead of Floyd being kidnapped, John Dory was.
After a long battle, he gave up. His fur turning more and more grey and transparent each passing day... 2 MONTHS. 2 WHOLE MONTHS of wanting to give up at life.. of pure sadness and his talent being taken away. Velvet was also very aggressive, hurting almost everyday. Venner, her little brother, was ... less mean.
Even when Velvet told him he wrote letters to his brothers, he didn't believe her, thinking she was trying to give him false hope. And even if she did, they probably hate him for breaking the band up. They won't come....
They did, or at least Floyd(who got the letter) came. John Dory was happy to see him, but was mad. WHY IS HE HERE?! he yelled at Floyd to leave, and NOT to go look for the others Floyd ignores him, telling him that he loves him and he will go look for the others to reunite and help him escape. They needed to hit the perfect hamarmony to break the diamond glass, so Floyd left. But definitely not without John Dory yelling for him to stop and just forget about him- nope, Floyd left...
And just like the movie- or not that much because they didn't have rhoanda with them(John Dorys armadello pet bus- she was locked up in the closet and fed poorly done food.) they had to make a long journey using travel bugs.
Floyd led his brothers to John Dory who was crouching, clutching his knees up to his chest, his back facing them.
Floyd almost cried at the sight.. last time he saw him, he didn't look that.. bad. he looked worst..
Bruce, Clay and Branch where in shock. after twenty years.. hey never thought to see the oldest like that.. Also(Poppy and Viva were there... because Poppy came along and when they were looking for Clay, they found out that Viva(leader of the Putt putt trolls was Poppys older long lost sister). Bruce and Clay came closer to the diamond prison perfume, startling John when he felt them speak. he turns over in a panic, his tail moving in a way that showed them that he was anxious and panicked. He gets up and almost cries.. his baby brothers.. grown men... tears stained his shirt.. He came closer and looked at Bruce and Clay.. oh my.. hey sure have grown..?.. behind them.. Baby Branch-.. a man.. just Branch.. no longer a baby.. he turns back around and sits on the floor. telling them to leave. they didn't and begged for him to just try to sing the perfect family harmony. But he refuses. telling them that Velvet and Venner are too dangerous. he yelled at them to leave. and by now, everyone was crying and begging for John Dory to not give up.. Branch felt sick.. and so did Floyd... he didn't know he would look this bad in just couple days.. blood smothered on his forehead.. She injured him.. hurt.. him.. and he was so weak it took everything for John Dory not to faint. But luck is never on his side, after an argument with his siblings, John Dory felt.. Dizzy. Very. he starts to stumble back. falling on his butt before fainting. Everyone panicked. screaming and banging on the diamond. That's when Velvet came in the room and tried to capture the rest but failed. and as revenge for failing to get the rest, she picks up the perfume and start to spray it on herself over and over again, John Dory woke up from the pain and started screaming, blood oozing out of his head more and more........................................
John dory:Late-30's. blue skin. He has forest green hair with black eyebrows, his eyes are cyan and black, and a purple indigo nose.brown jacket with white fluffy part around his neck with brown dots. Charming, Kind, energetic for his age, weak-strong, funny, and just a humble old troll. And his tail really shows how he's feeling(it helps him express how he feels and you can tell how he feels by looking at it.) Dyslexic, ADHD, kinda schizophrenic from living in a dangerous trail for over 20 years and sometimes sees things that aren't there. and he's also pretty watchful and actually is missing an arm but his brothers dont know because he made a fake one and coverd it. will be revealed during the story. also the second shortest out of his brothers, even though he's the oldest. 5'2 inches tall because.. well he's a troll.
Bruce:Late-mid-30's. Blue skin, chubby, has a wife and lots of kids(12 sons, 1 daughter). second oldest, Long-puffy-and lots of purple hair. vacy type stype. kind, fatherly instincts will be shown to his brothers and even John dory(who gets a little flustered because he's the oldest) kinda strict but laid-back. understanding. forgiving. most charming, and used to get all the trolldussy back then, pretty tall, 5'8 inches.(bc... they are trolls..)
Clay:Mid-30's, also blue skin,very skinny and has crazy long green-lime hair, serious, funny, mean to John dory(not for long) and isn't very forgiving.. loves books, green fit, tallest out of his siblings(6'2 inches.. bc they are trolls) and loves to tease everyone, especially John dory because he used to tease him. third oldest.
Floyd:Early-30's, blue skin, pink-magenta hair with one white stripe(after velvet and venner), and his hair kinda covers his eyes, and is the most kindest, sensitive, worriedful. white earling on his right ear, no shirt, belt with dark brown shorts, fourth oldest. maybe branchs favorite brother, forgiving, shortest brother (5'1 inches--they are trolls...)
Branch:Early-mid-20's, grey-blueish skin, dark blue hair, youngest brother, grumpy, kinda mean, kind, smart, helpful, not that forgiving, third tallest(5'7 inches-they are trolls), girlfriend:Poppy, queen of trolls, very energetic, pinky troll. outfit:the leaf vest Floyd gave him the day they left, brown shorts. paranoid, Autistic, overprotective.
And yes, ALL trolls have tails.
start from the beginning and be very creative and add lots of dialogue.
Location on where John Dory is being held at: Velvet and Venner(Rich teenagers size of a bergan and have been Rich every since they where little and have terrible voices so they use his talent by spraying that perfume bottle for their talent) large music setup and were they do their makeup, change into their outfits room, in a strong, beautiful, fancy, diamond perfume and can only be broken with the perfect family harmony.
its about John Dory, the oldest brother of BROZONE.
but instead of Floyd being kidnapped, John Dory was.
After a long battle, he gave up. His fur turning more and more grey and transparent each passing day... 2 MONTHS. 2 WHOLE MONTHS of wanting to give up at life.. of pure sadness and his talent being taken away. Velvet was also very aggressive, hurting almost everyday. Venner, her little brother, was ... less mean.
Even when Velvet told him he wrote letters to his brothers, he didn't believe her, thinking she was trying to give him false hope. And even if she did, they probably hate him for breaking the band up. They won't come....
They did, or at least Floyd(who got the letter) came. John Dory was happy to see him, but was mad. WHY IS HE HERE?! he yelled at Floyd to leave, and NOT to go look for the others Floyd ignores him, telling him that he loves him and he will go look for the others to reunite and help him escape. They needed to hit the perfect hamarmony to break the diamond glass, so Floyd left. But definitely not without John Dory yelling for him to stop and just forget about him- nope, Floyd left...
And just like the movie- or not that much because they didn't have rhoanda with them(John Dorys armadello pet bus- she was locked up in the closet and fed poorly done food.) they had to make a long journey using travel bugs.
Floyd led his brothers to John Dory who was crouching, clutching his knees up to his chest, his back facing them.
Floyd almost cried at the sight.. last time he saw him, he didn't look that.. bad. he looked worst..
Bruce, Clay and Branch where in shock. after twenty years.. hey never thought to see the oldest like that.. Also(Poppy and Viva were there... because Poppy came along and when they were looking for Clay, they found out that Viva(leader of the Putt putt trolls was Poppys older long lost sister). Bruce and Clay came closer to the diamond prison perfume, startling John when he felt them speak. he turns over in a panic, his tail moving in a way that showed them that he was anxious and panicked. He gets up and almost cries.. his baby brothers.. grown men... tears stained his shirt.. He came closer and looked at Bruce and Clay.. oh my.. hey sure have grown..?.. behind them.. Baby Branch-.. a man.. just Branch.. no longer a baby.. he turns back around and sits on the floor. telling them to leave. they didn't and begged for him to just try to sing the perfect family harmony. But he refuses. telling them that Velvet and Venner are too dangerous. he yelled at them to leave. and by now, everyone was crying and begging for John Dory to not give up.. Branch felt sick.. and so did Floyd... he didn't know he would look this bad in just couple days.. blood smothered on his forehead.. She injured him.. hurt.. him.. and he was so weak it took everything for John Dory not to faint. But luck is never on his side, after an argument with his siblings, John Dory felt.. Dizzy. Very. he starts to stumble back. falling on his butt before fainting. Everyone panicked. screaming and banging on the diamond. That's when Velvet came in the room and tried to capture the rest but failed. and as revenge for failing to get the rest, she picks up the perfume and start to spray it on herself over and over again, John Dory woke up from the pain and started screaming, blood oozing out of his head more and more........................................
John dory:Late-30's. blue skin. He has forest green hair with black eyebrows, his eyes are cyan and black, and a purple indigo nose.brown jacket with white fluffy part around his neck with brown dots. Charming, Kind, energetic for his age, weak-strong, funny, and just a humble old troll. And his tail really shows how he's feeling(it helps him express how he feels and you can tell how he feels by looking at it.) Dyslexic, ADHD, kinda schizophrenic from living in a dangerous trail for over 20 years and sometimes sees things that aren't there. and he's also pretty watchful and actually is missing an arm but his brothers dont know because he made a fake one and coverd it. will be revealed during the story. also the second shortest out of his brothers, even though he's the oldest. 5'2 inches tall because.. well he's a troll.
Bruce:Late-mid-30's. Blue skin, chubby, has a wife and lots of kids(12 sons, 1 daughter). second oldest, Long-puffy-and lots of purple hair. vacy type stype. kind, fatherly instincts will be shown to his brothers and even John dory(who gets a little flustered because he's the oldest) kinda strict but laid-back. understanding. forgiving. most charming, and used to get all the trolldussy back then, pretty tall, 5'8 inches.(bc... they are trolls..)
Clay:Mid-30's, also blue skin,very skinny and has crazy long green-lime hair, serious, funny, mean to John dory(not for long) and isn't very forgiving.. loves books, green fit, tallest out of his siblings(6'2 inches.. bc they are trolls) and loves to tease everyone, especially John dory because he used to tease him. third oldest.
Floyd:Early-30's, blue skin, pink-magenta hair with one white stripe(after velvet and venner), and his hair kinda covers his eyes, and is the most kindest, sensitive, worriedful. white earling on his right ear, no shirt, belt with dark brown shorts, fourth oldest. maybe branchs favorite brother, forgiving, shortest brother (5'1 inches--they are trolls...)
Branch:Early-mid-20's, grey-blueish skin, dark blue hair, youngest brother, grumpy, kinda mean, kind, smart, helpful, not that forgiving, third tallest(5'7 inches-they are trolls), girlfriend:Poppy, queen of trolls, very energetic, pinky troll. outfit:the leaf vest Floyd gave him the day they left, brown shorts. paranoid, Autistic, overprotective.
And yes, ALL trolls have tails.
start from the beginning and be very creative and add lots of dialogue.
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**Title: Shadows and Harmonies**
**Setting:** Velvet and Venner's extravagant hideout, a shimmering fortress surrounded by a shimmering mist, boasting opulence that belies the dark practices within. The hideout is a luxurious set-up that includes a large music station, extravagant mirrors lined with shimmering lights, and a dressing room filled with extravagant costumes adorned with jewels. But the pièce de résistance is a diamond perfume bottle, a cruel prison for John Dory, that exudes a perfume that can only be broken by achieving the perfect family harmony.
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**Summary:**
Once a charismatic and high-spirited figure in the flamboyant world of music, **John Dory**, the oldest brother in **BROZONE**, finds himself trapped in a diamond prison, the price of a wicked twist of fate. While his younger brother **Floyd** was supposed to be the target of Velvet’s malice, it was John who was snatched away, leaving behind the promising life he cherished. For **two long months**, he endured the anguishing ordeal, his once-vibrant blue skin fading to a dull transparency, as tears soaked the collar of his brown jacket with its white fluffy neck. Under the oppressive reign of **Velvet**, an angry and manipulative tyrant, John faced relentless torment, while her brother **Venner** remained a reluctant participant, showing him brief kindness during moments of agony.
“Just give up, John,” Velvet sneered, her voice laced with malice as she surveyed him through the gleaming glass. “You’re not worth the hassle.”
“No! I won’t give you the satisfaction!” he shouted back feebly, but with each passing day, fighting became increasingly taxing.
He often lost hope, especially when Velvet claimed he was a forgotten memory to his brothers. **Floyd** reached him through the cracks of that cruel statement, reminding him he had once been loved, cherished, and most importantly, adored for his gift: his voice. But it all felt meaningless in the diamond prison, surrounded by the memories of the harmonious melodies they used to create together.
FFloyd, a gentle soul wrapped in a cloak of worries, refused to believe Velvet. “She’s lying!” he insisted, his pink-magenta hair reflecting the desperation in his heart. “I’ll get you out, just hold on a little longer!”
Yet, when the day came that Floyd managed to break through, John’s heart swelled with conflicting emotions. “What are you doing here, Floyd? You should leave!” John’s tail flicked nervously, mirroring the panic in his heart as he saw his brother’s determined figure step forward.
“I love you, John! I need to get the others and help you escape! Just sing for me; we need to create that harmony!” Floyd implored, but John turned away, too afraid of what that might bring.
“NO! It’s too dangerous! You don’t understand!” John’s voice cracked and echoed through the chamber, but Floyd's love was relentless.
“Trust me, I won't back down,” Floyd stated firmly, resolving to leave and find the others.
“Floyd, don’t—” John attempted to shout, but his brother was already gone, leaving behind nothing but the chill of despair.
Desperate and broken, John succumbed to hopelessness, regretting the day he believed Velvet’s lies. As the days passed, he clutched his knees tighter to his chest, feeling the weight of an unbearable burden, and every moment stretched into eternity in the luscious confines of his diamond prison, his only companion **Rhoanda**, his beloved armadillo pet, locked away in the closet.
---
**The Reunion:**
Eventually, Floyd, buoyed by love and determination, rallied their brothers, **Bruce**, **Clay**, and **Branch**, along with **Poppy** and her newfound sister **Viva**, to embark on a perilous journey filled with travel bugs, finding strength along the way—all to reach John. They traversed through misty, treacherous terrains that challenged the very fabric of their brotherhood but were propelled forward by relentless hope.
When they arrived at Velvet and Venner’s lair, the atmosphere was heavy with hidden fears. Floyd, leading the charge, gasped at the sight before him; John Dory was collapsed on the floor, a shell of the brother he once knew. The background of their childhood musings felt foreign and painful.
“Look—it’s John!” Floyd exclaimed, his voice shaky with emotion.
“John?!” Bruce rushed forward, concerned flooding his features as the rest of the brothers followed suit.
As John heard their voices, he turned, panic flashing in his cyan eyes. “Leave! Just go!” His tail lashed behind him, expressing distress.
“John, please don’t—” Bruce beckoned gently, but John was too deep in his anguish to hear reason.
“You've grown,” he whispered in an daze, staring up at bruised eyes of Bruce and the taller, sharp features of Clay. “You’re all... here?”
John recoiled, his heart twisting in agony. “I’m a broken troll… Please, just let me be.”
Tears brimmed in Floyd’s eyes. “No, not like this. We need to try!"
“Try? With Velvet and Venner around? You can’t be serious!” John almost cried, remembering the pain she had inflicted on him.
They shared a moment of quiet despair, slumped on the floor while panic gripped their hearts. John’s face was streaked with remnants of blood, faint and vulnerable under layers of neglect.
“Look,” Clay interrupted, his humor momentarily forgotten. “If we want to break that glass, we need to unite. We are BROZONE, after all.”
“Family harmony…” John uttered, the notion filling him with a ghost of hope.
“You can do it, John!” Floyd held onto his brother’s shimmering sweater. “Please!”
Almost reluctantly, John stood, struggling as his body protested; it felt like climbing a mountain. “They’ll hurt you,” he warned, his voice hollow.
But they weren’t listening; they believed in him. He took a deep breath, remembering the times they rallied together, voices ringing through the air. “One… two… three…”
Just as they felt the harmonies rise, a jagged crack was heard, sending chills through the room. John’s voice shook the very foundations they had built, a whisper of love mixed with fear.
Suddenly the door burst open—**Velvet** stormed in with fury blazing in her eyes. “What is this?!” she screeched, and behind her, they could see **Venner**, reluctantly watching as his sister bristled with wrath.
“Let them go!” John screamed, his voice igniting the air around him. “They are my family; you will not take them from me!”
But before he could finish, darkness blurred into his vision as he felt a sharp pain surge through him, a cruel laugh from Velvet echoing in the air as she began to spray herself with the very perfume that had imprisoned him, claiming more power with each spray.
The threshold of his despair was breached; John’s world faded into darkness as his body crumpled again onto the floor, leaving his family screaming against the grain of their own torment.
---
The stage was set for a clash between love, family ties, and the cruel dissonance of Velvet’s oppressive reign. Would John find the strength to break free from the diamond prison forged from despair? Would BROZONE reunite through the power of music and harmony? As the story unfolds, a tale of love, resilience, and the quest for familial connection becomes the very binding essence, illuminating a path through the shadows of deep turmoil.
**Setting:** Velvet and Venner's extravagant hideout, a shimmering fortress surrounded by a shimmering mist, boasting opulence that belies the dark practices within. The hideout is a luxurious set-up that includes a large music station, extravagant mirrors lined with shimmering lights, and a dressing room filled with extravagant costumes adorned with jewels. But the pièce de résistance is a diamond perfume bottle, a cruel prison for John Dory, that exudes a perfume that can only be broken by achieving the perfect family harmony.
---
**Summary:**
Once a charismatic and high-spirited figure in the flamboyant world of music, **John Dory**, the oldest brother in **BROZONE**, finds himself trapped in a diamond prison, the price of a wicked twist of fate. While his younger brother **Floyd** was supposed to be the target of Velvet’s malice, it was John who was snatched away, leaving behind the promising life he cherished. For **two long months**, he endured the anguishing ordeal, his once-vibrant blue skin fading to a dull transparency, as tears soaked the collar of his brown jacket with its white fluffy neck. Under the oppressive reign of **Velvet**, an angry and manipulative tyrant, John faced relentless torment, while her brother **Venner** remained a reluctant participant, showing him brief kindness during moments of agony.
“Just give up, John,” Velvet sneered, her voice laced with malice as she surveyed him through the gleaming glass. “You’re not worth the hassle.”
“No! I won’t give you the satisfaction!” he shouted back feebly, but with each passing day, fighting became increasingly taxing.
He often lost hope, especially when Velvet claimed he was a forgotten memory to his brothers. **Floyd** reached him through the cracks of that cruel statement, reminding him he had once been loved, cherished, and most importantly, adored for his gift: his voice. But it all felt meaningless in the diamond prison, surrounded by the memories of the harmonious melodies they used to create together.
FFloyd, a gentle soul wrapped in a cloak of worries, refused to believe Velvet. “She’s lying!” he insisted, his pink-magenta hair reflecting the desperation in his heart. “I’ll get you out, just hold on a little longer!”
Yet, when the day came that Floyd managed to break through, John’s heart swelled with conflicting emotions. “What are you doing here, Floyd? You should leave!” John’s tail flicked nervously, mirroring the panic in his heart as he saw his brother’s determined figure step forward.
“I love you, John! I need to get the others and help you escape! Just sing for me; we need to create that harmony!” Floyd implored, but John turned away, too afraid of what that might bring.
“NO! It’s too dangerous! You don’t understand!” John’s voice cracked and echoed through the chamber, but Floyd's love was relentless.
“Trust me, I won't back down,” Floyd stated firmly, resolving to leave and find the others.
“Floyd, don’t—” John attempted to shout, but his brother was already gone, leaving behind nothing but the chill of despair.
Desperate and broken, John succumbed to hopelessness, regretting the day he believed Velvet’s lies. As the days passed, he clutched his knees tighter to his chest, feeling the weight of an unbearable burden, and every moment stretched into eternity in the luscious confines of his diamond prison, his only companion **Rhoanda**, his beloved armadillo pet, locked away in the closet.
---
**The Reunion:**
Eventually, Floyd, buoyed by love and determination, rallied their brothers, **Bruce**, **Clay**, and **Branch**, along with **Poppy** and her newfound sister **Viva**, to embark on a perilous journey filled with travel bugs, finding strength along the way—all to reach John. They traversed through misty, treacherous terrains that challenged the very fabric of their brotherhood but were propelled forward by relentless hope.
When they arrived at Velvet and Venner’s lair, the atmosphere was heavy with hidden fears. Floyd, leading the charge, gasped at the sight before him; John Dory was collapsed on the floor, a shell of the brother he once knew. The background of their childhood musings felt foreign and painful.
“Look—it’s John!” Floyd exclaimed, his voice shaky with emotion.
“John?!” Bruce rushed forward, concerned flooding his features as the rest of the brothers followed suit.
As John heard their voices, he turned, panic flashing in his cyan eyes. “Leave! Just go!” His tail lashed behind him, expressing distress.
“John, please don’t—” Bruce beckoned gently, but John was too deep in his anguish to hear reason.
“You've grown,” he whispered in an daze, staring up at bruised eyes of Bruce and the taller, sharp features of Clay. “You’re all... here?”
John recoiled, his heart twisting in agony. “I’m a broken troll… Please, just let me be.”
Tears brimmed in Floyd’s eyes. “No, not like this. We need to try!"
“Try? With Velvet and Venner around? You can’t be serious!” John almost cried, remembering the pain she had inflicted on him.
They shared a moment of quiet despair, slumped on the floor while panic gripped their hearts. John’s face was streaked with remnants of blood, faint and vulnerable under layers of neglect.
“Look,” Clay interrupted, his humor momentarily forgotten. “If we want to break that glass, we need to unite. We are BROZONE, after all.”
“Family harmony…” John uttered, the notion filling him with a ghost of hope.
“You can do it, John!” Floyd held onto his brother’s shimmering sweater. “Please!”
Almost reluctantly, John stood, struggling as his body protested; it felt like climbing a mountain. “They’ll hurt you,” he warned, his voice hollow.
But they weren’t listening; they believed in him. He took a deep breath, remembering the times they rallied together, voices ringing through the air. “One… two… three…”
Just as they felt the harmonies rise, a jagged crack was heard, sending chills through the room. John’s voice shook the very foundations they had built, a whisper of love mixed with fear.
Suddenly the door burst open—**Velvet** stormed in with fury blazing in her eyes. “What is this?!” she screeched, and behind her, they could see **Venner**, reluctantly watching as his sister bristled with wrath.
“Let them go!” John screamed, his voice igniting the air around him. “They are my family; you will not take them from me!”
But before he could finish, darkness blurred into his vision as he felt a sharp pain surge through him, a cruel laugh from Velvet echoing in the air as she began to spray herself with the very perfume that had imprisoned him, claiming more power with each spray.
The threshold of his despair was breached; John’s world faded into darkness as his body crumpled again onto the floor, leaving his family screaming against the grain of their own torment.
---
The stage was set for a clash between love, family ties, and the cruel dissonance of Velvet’s oppressive reign. Would John find the strength to break free from the diamond prison forged from despair? Would BROZONE reunite through the power of music and harmony? As the story unfolds, a tale of love, resilience, and the quest for familial connection becomes the very binding essence, illuminating a path through the shadows of deep turmoil.
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