Question
Patterns of Power
MENTOR SENTENCE:
Brent ambles across Justin’s lawn in a muscle T, annihilating patches of innocent grass with his gigantic flip-flops.
INVITATION TO NOTICE (note at least four features of the mentor sentence): Monday
1. 2.
3.. 4.
MENTOR SENTENCE:
Brent ambles across Justin’s lawn in a muscle T, annihilating patches of innocent grass with his gigantic flip-flops.
INVITATION TO NOTICE (note at least four features of the mentor sentence): Monday
1. 2.
3.. 4.
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1. **Vivid Imagery**: The sentence uses descriptive language (“gigantic flip-flops,” “innocent grass”) to create a mental picture for the reader, making the scene more engaging.
2. **Action Verb Choice**: The verb “ambles” conveys a relaxed, leisurely movement, which sets a specific tone for Brent’s character and demeanor.
3. **Contrasting Elements**: The juxtaposition of “innocent grass” with the destructive action of “annihilating” suggests a clash between nature and human behavior, adding depth to the narrative.
4. **Specific Details**: The inclusion of specific details, such as “muscle T” and “gigantic flip-flops,” adds personality to Brent and gives a sense of casualness, allowing readers to visualize both his appearance and attitude.
2. **Action Verb Choice**: The verb “ambles” conveys a relaxed, leisurely movement, which sets a specific tone for Brent’s character and demeanor.
3. **Contrasting Elements**: The juxtaposition of “innocent grass” with the destructive action of “annihilating” suggests a clash between nature and human behavior, adding depth to the narrative.
4. **Specific Details**: The inclusion of specific details, such as “muscle T” and “gigantic flip-flops,” adds personality to Brent and gives a sense of casualness, allowing readers to visualize both his appearance and attitude.
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