Question
Assignment Instructions:
Read the short passage “The Reader.”
Imagine how the story might continue after Jorge enters the secret passageway and write an ending to this story using the criteria listed below. (You may use the graphic organizer under these instructions for help, but you do NOT have to turn this in.) Your story must be TYPED in a Google document. (Do NOT copy & paste.) Use these instructions if you are not sure how to sign in to your school Google account. Per school policy, all writing assignments must now be completed in a Google Doc or in Google Slides. No other formats will be accepted. Any assignments submitted in a format other than a Google Docs or Google Slides link will temporarily receive a zero until the link is submitted.
It is ok to use AI to help generate ideas for your story like you did last semester, but the majority of the story should be written in your own words. Your narrative should be no more than 25% written by AI.
When you have finished writing, copy & paste your story into the discussion text box as your initial post. Use these instructions on how to complete a discussion assignment if you need help.
In the Unit 2 Lesson 6 Discussion, you will be receiving feedback about your story from your classmates. When you get to Unit 3 Lesson 1, view the feedback left for you in the Discussion threads and revise your story as needed.
In Unit 3 Lesson 2, submit the link to the final draft of your story to the assessment at the end of the lesson. Make sure the share settings are set to “Anyone with the link can EDIT” so your teachers can make comments, if necessary. Use these instructions if you need help with your share settings.
Requirements/Writer’s Checklist:
❏ Use 3rd Person Point of View - Remember, you are speaking as the narrator, so use 3rd person pronouns like “he” and “his.”
❏ Your story should be 1-2 pages (double-spaced) and should include the following:
❏ Setting- Use sensory language to describe where the passageway leads.
❏ Characterization- Create at least one character Jorge meets. Use sensory language & be descriptive!
❏ Dialogue- Include a conversation between Jorge and the new character. (Must have at least 4 lines of dialogue, properly punctuated.)
❏ Resolution & Conclusion- How does the story end?
❏ Use active voice. Avoid using too many being verbs like is, was, were, etc.
❏ 3 paragraphs minimum (1- 2 pages, double-spaced)
❏ Use proper spelling and conventions, including MLA Format.
Help Resources:
MLA Google Template
Portfolio Help Video
Punctuating Dialogue Help
Sensory Word List
Extra Credit:
To earn extra credit, include a drawing of the setting and/or the new character Jorge meets OR create a collage of pictures that represent the setting and/or the new character. (Google Images is a great place to find pictures to use in your collage.) Submit your drawing or collage to the drop box along with your narrative.
Narrative Writing Outline
A narrative is a spoken or written account of a series of connected events; in other words, a story.
Beginning
(In the climax of the story, Jorge is trapped in the secret passageway.)
Setting- Where does the secret passageway lead?
Describe the setting using sensory language.
...Jorge began walking away from his bedroom, away from his armchair and the comfort of his home. Each step took him farther into the dark and mysterious tunnel.
Begin Your Story Here…
Characterization- Create at least one character Jorge meets. Use sensory language in your description.
Middle
(In the falling action, what steps do Jorge & the new character take to overcome the conflict?)
Action- What do Jorge & the new character do? Use active voice.
Dialogue- Include a conversation between Jorge and the new character. (Must have at least 4 lines of dialogue & must use correct punctuation for dialogue.)
End
(In the resolution, how is the conflict resolved? You MUST have a resolution. No cliffhangers!)
Resolution- How is the conflict resolved? Does Jorge go back home?
Conclusion- How does the story end? What has Jorge learned from this experience?
Make sure it has a new character and it sounds like a 9th grader made it
Read the short passage “The Reader.”
Imagine how the story might continue after Jorge enters the secret passageway and write an ending to this story using the criteria listed below. (You may use the graphic organizer under these instructions for help, but you do NOT have to turn this in.) Your story must be TYPED in a Google document. (Do NOT copy & paste.) Use these instructions if you are not sure how to sign in to your school Google account. Per school policy, all writing assignments must now be completed in a Google Doc or in Google Slides. No other formats will be accepted. Any assignments submitted in a format other than a Google Docs or Google Slides link will temporarily receive a zero until the link is submitted.
It is ok to use AI to help generate ideas for your story like you did last semester, but the majority of the story should be written in your own words. Your narrative should be no more than 25% written by AI.
When you have finished writing, copy & paste your story into the discussion text box as your initial post. Use these instructions on how to complete a discussion assignment if you need help.
In the Unit 2 Lesson 6 Discussion, you will be receiving feedback about your story from your classmates. When you get to Unit 3 Lesson 1, view the feedback left for you in the Discussion threads and revise your story as needed.
In Unit 3 Lesson 2, submit the link to the final draft of your story to the assessment at the end of the lesson. Make sure the share settings are set to “Anyone with the link can EDIT” so your teachers can make comments, if necessary. Use these instructions if you need help with your share settings.
Requirements/Writer’s Checklist:
❏ Use 3rd Person Point of View - Remember, you are speaking as the narrator, so use 3rd person pronouns like “he” and “his.”
❏ Your story should be 1-2 pages (double-spaced) and should include the following:
❏ Setting- Use sensory language to describe where the passageway leads.
❏ Characterization- Create at least one character Jorge meets. Use sensory language & be descriptive!
❏ Dialogue- Include a conversation between Jorge and the new character. (Must have at least 4 lines of dialogue, properly punctuated.)
❏ Resolution & Conclusion- How does the story end?
❏ Use active voice. Avoid using too many being verbs like is, was, were, etc.
❏ 3 paragraphs minimum (1- 2 pages, double-spaced)
❏ Use proper spelling and conventions, including MLA Format.
Help Resources:
MLA Google Template
Portfolio Help Video
Punctuating Dialogue Help
Sensory Word List
Extra Credit:
To earn extra credit, include a drawing of the setting and/or the new character Jorge meets OR create a collage of pictures that represent the setting and/or the new character. (Google Images is a great place to find pictures to use in your collage.) Submit your drawing or collage to the drop box along with your narrative.
Narrative Writing Outline
A narrative is a spoken or written account of a series of connected events; in other words, a story.
Beginning
(In the climax of the story, Jorge is trapped in the secret passageway.)
Setting- Where does the secret passageway lead?
Describe the setting using sensory language.
...Jorge began walking away from his bedroom, away from his armchair and the comfort of his home. Each step took him farther into the dark and mysterious tunnel.
Begin Your Story Here…
Characterization- Create at least one character Jorge meets. Use sensory language in your description.
Middle
(In the falling action, what steps do Jorge & the new character take to overcome the conflict?)
Action- What do Jorge & the new character do? Use active voice.
Dialogue- Include a conversation between Jorge and the new character. (Must have at least 4 lines of dialogue & must use correct punctuation for dialogue.)
End
(In the resolution, how is the conflict resolved? You MUST have a resolution. No cliffhangers!)
Resolution- How is the conflict resolved? Does Jorge go back home?
Conclusion- How does the story end? What has Jorge learned from this experience?
Make sure it has a new character and it sounds like a 9th grader made it
Answers
GPT-4o mini
**Title: The Secret Passageway**
Jorge began walking away from his bedroom, away from his armchair and the comfort of his home. Each step took him farther into the dark and mysterious tunnel. The dampness of the walls brushed against his skin, sending shivers up his spine. Faint echoes skittered across the passageway, whispering secrets from the past. Jorge clutched the flashlight tightly in his hand as beams of light flickered across moss-covered stones and shadows danced like specters on the walls. The air grew cooler; the once-familiar sounds of his house faded into nothingness, leaving only the sound of his heartbeat ringing in his ears.
As he ventured deeper into the tunnel, the path opened into a vast cavern. Glowing crystals embedded in the rock illuminated the space, casting a pale blue light that shimmered like stars. It was breathtaking yet unnerving. In the center of the cavern stood an ancient oak tree, its trunk gnarled and twisted, branches stretching toward the ceiling like skeletal fingers. Beneath the tree, Jorge spotted a figure sitting cross-legged on the ground. As he approached cautiously, he realized it was a girl about his age, her hair flowing like a waterfall of silver, eyes bright and curious.
"Who are you?" Jorge asked, his voice echoing softly in the cavern.
The girl looked up, her expression one of intrigue mixed with amusement. "I am Elara, guardian of the passage," she said, her voice melodic, like the sound of a gentle stream.
"Guardian? What does that mean?" Jorge questioned, confusion knitting his brow.
"It means I protect the secrets of this passageway," Elara replied. "But I can’t do it alone. Why have you come here, Jorge?"
Jorge hesitated, realizing that he had not just stumbled upon the passageway out of mere curiosity. “I... I wanted to escape. My life up there seems so mundane. There’s something magical about this place.”
Elara smiled knowingly. “Magic does not reside only in mysteries; it exists in the connections we forge.”
In that moment, Jorge felt an unexpected bond forming between them, like the roots of the ancient tree spreading through the earth. He explained his struggles, the monotony of his daily life, and how he sought a change. Elara listened intently, her eyes reflecting his dreams and fears.
Together they hatched a plan. Jorge would not only explore the passage but also find a way to blend the magic of this secret world with his own. Elara handed him a shimmering crystal. “This will remind you of the magic here when you return home. Use it to spark creativity in your life above.”
As they stood together, Jorge felt a surge of determination. He thanked Elara for her wisdom and the gift. “I promise to return and share my stories,” he vowed.
The journey back felt different; Jorge carried a new sense of purpose, the weight of anxiety lifting as he climbed back toward the light. Emerging from the tunnel, he looked back one last time, the secrets of the passageway now firmly etched in his heart.
Jorge realized that home was not just a place, but a canvas waiting to be painted with vibrant colors of adventure and imagination. He learned that while magic was often hidden in the world around him, it could also be sparked within himself. With the crystal now tucked safely in his pocket, he stepped forward, ready to embrace a life full of wonder, stories, and endless possibilities.
Jorge began walking away from his bedroom, away from his armchair and the comfort of his home. Each step took him farther into the dark and mysterious tunnel. The dampness of the walls brushed against his skin, sending shivers up his spine. Faint echoes skittered across the passageway, whispering secrets from the past. Jorge clutched the flashlight tightly in his hand as beams of light flickered across moss-covered stones and shadows danced like specters on the walls. The air grew cooler; the once-familiar sounds of his house faded into nothingness, leaving only the sound of his heartbeat ringing in his ears.
As he ventured deeper into the tunnel, the path opened into a vast cavern. Glowing crystals embedded in the rock illuminated the space, casting a pale blue light that shimmered like stars. It was breathtaking yet unnerving. In the center of the cavern stood an ancient oak tree, its trunk gnarled and twisted, branches stretching toward the ceiling like skeletal fingers. Beneath the tree, Jorge spotted a figure sitting cross-legged on the ground. As he approached cautiously, he realized it was a girl about his age, her hair flowing like a waterfall of silver, eyes bright and curious.
"Who are you?" Jorge asked, his voice echoing softly in the cavern.
The girl looked up, her expression one of intrigue mixed with amusement. "I am Elara, guardian of the passage," she said, her voice melodic, like the sound of a gentle stream.
"Guardian? What does that mean?" Jorge questioned, confusion knitting his brow.
"It means I protect the secrets of this passageway," Elara replied. "But I can’t do it alone. Why have you come here, Jorge?"
Jorge hesitated, realizing that he had not just stumbled upon the passageway out of mere curiosity. “I... I wanted to escape. My life up there seems so mundane. There’s something magical about this place.”
Elara smiled knowingly. “Magic does not reside only in mysteries; it exists in the connections we forge.”
In that moment, Jorge felt an unexpected bond forming between them, like the roots of the ancient tree spreading through the earth. He explained his struggles, the monotony of his daily life, and how he sought a change. Elara listened intently, her eyes reflecting his dreams and fears.
Together they hatched a plan. Jorge would not only explore the passage but also find a way to blend the magic of this secret world with his own. Elara handed him a shimmering crystal. “This will remind you of the magic here when you return home. Use it to spark creativity in your life above.”
As they stood together, Jorge felt a surge of determination. He thanked Elara for her wisdom and the gift. “I promise to return and share my stories,” he vowed.
The journey back felt different; Jorge carried a new sense of purpose, the weight of anxiety lifting as he climbed back toward the light. Emerging from the tunnel, he looked back one last time, the secrets of the passageway now firmly etched in his heart.
Jorge realized that home was not just a place, but a canvas waiting to be painted with vibrant colors of adventure and imagination. He learned that while magic was often hidden in the world around him, it could also be sparked within himself. With the crystal now tucked safely in his pocket, he stepped forward, ready to embrace a life full of wonder, stories, and endless possibilities.