Question
Assignment Instructions:
Read the short passage “The Reader.”
Imagine how the story might continue after Jorge enters the secret passageway and write an ending to this story using the criteria listed below. (You may use the graphic organizer under these instructions for help, but you do NOT have to turn this in.) Your story must be TYPED in a Google document. (Do NOT copy & paste.) Use these instructions if you are not sure how to sign in to your school Google account. Per school policy, all writing assignments must now be completed in a Google Doc or in Google Slides. No other formats will be accepted. Any assignments submitted in a format other than a Google Docs or Google Slides link will temporarily receive a zero until the link is submitted.
It is ok to use AI to help generate ideas for your story like you did last semester, but the majority of the story should be written in your own words. Your narrative should be no more than 25% written by AI.
When you have finished writing, copy & paste your story into the discussion text box as your initial post. Use these instructions on how to complete a discussion assignment if you need help.
In the Unit 2 Lesson 6 Discussion, you will be receiving feedback about your story from your classmates. When you get to Unit 3 Lesson 1, view the feedback left for you in the Discussion threads and revise your story as needed.
In Unit 3 Lesson 2, submit the link to the final draft of your story to the assessment at the end of the lesson. Make sure the share settings are set to “Anyone with the link can EDIT” so your teachers can make comments, if necessary. Use these instructions if you need help with your share settings.
Requirements/Writer’s Checklist:
❏ Use 3rd Person Point of View - Remember, you are speaking as the narrator, so use 3rd person pronouns like “he” and “his.”
❏ Your story should be 1-2 pages (double-spaced) and should include the following:
❏ Setting- Use sensory language to describe where the passageway leads.
❏ Characterization- Create at least one character Jorge meets. Use sensory language & be descriptive!
❏ Dialogue- Include a conversation between Jorge and the new character. (Must have at least 4 lines of dialogue, properly punctuated.)
❏ Resolution & Conclusion- How does the story end?
❏ Use active voice. Avoid using too many being verbs like is, was, were, etc.
❏ 3 paragraphs minimum (1- 2 pages, double-spaced)
❏ Use proper spelling and conventions, including MLA Format.
Help Resources:
MLA Google Template
Portfolio Help Video
Punctuating Dialogue Help
Sensory Word List
Extra Credit:
To earn extra credit, include a drawing of the setting and/or the new character Jorge meets OR create a collage of pictures that represent the setting and/or the new character. (Google Images is a great place to find pictures to use in your collage.) Submit your drawing or collage to the drop box along with your narrative.
Narrative Writing Outline
A narrative is a spoken or written account of a series of connected events; in other words, a story.
Beginning
(In the climax of the story, Jorge is trapped in the secret passageway.)
Setting- Where does the secret passageway lead?
Describe the setting using sensory language.
...Jorge began walking away from his bedroom, away from his armchair and the comfort of his home. Each step took him farther into the dark and mysterious tunnel.
Begin Your Story Here…
Characterization- Create at least one character Jorge meets. Use sensory language in your description.
Middle
(In the falling action, what steps do Jorge & the new character take to overcome the conflict?)
Action- What do Jorge & the new character do? Use active voice.
Dialogue- Include a conversation between Jorge and the new character. (Must have at least 4 lines of dialogue & must use correct punctuation for dialogue.)
End
(In the resolution, how is the conflict resolved? You MUST have a resolution. No cliffhangers!)
Resolution- How is the conflict resolved? Does Jorge go back home?
Conclusion- How does the story end? What has Jorge learned from this experience?
Read the short passage “The Reader.”
Imagine how the story might continue after Jorge enters the secret passageway and write an ending to this story using the criteria listed below. (You may use the graphic organizer under these instructions for help, but you do NOT have to turn this in.) Your story must be TYPED in a Google document. (Do NOT copy & paste.) Use these instructions if you are not sure how to sign in to your school Google account. Per school policy, all writing assignments must now be completed in a Google Doc or in Google Slides. No other formats will be accepted. Any assignments submitted in a format other than a Google Docs or Google Slides link will temporarily receive a zero until the link is submitted.
It is ok to use AI to help generate ideas for your story like you did last semester, but the majority of the story should be written in your own words. Your narrative should be no more than 25% written by AI.
When you have finished writing, copy & paste your story into the discussion text box as your initial post. Use these instructions on how to complete a discussion assignment if you need help.
In the Unit 2 Lesson 6 Discussion, you will be receiving feedback about your story from your classmates. When you get to Unit 3 Lesson 1, view the feedback left for you in the Discussion threads and revise your story as needed.
In Unit 3 Lesson 2, submit the link to the final draft of your story to the assessment at the end of the lesson. Make sure the share settings are set to “Anyone with the link can EDIT” so your teachers can make comments, if necessary. Use these instructions if you need help with your share settings.
Requirements/Writer’s Checklist:
❏ Use 3rd Person Point of View - Remember, you are speaking as the narrator, so use 3rd person pronouns like “he” and “his.”
❏ Your story should be 1-2 pages (double-spaced) and should include the following:
❏ Setting- Use sensory language to describe where the passageway leads.
❏ Characterization- Create at least one character Jorge meets. Use sensory language & be descriptive!
❏ Dialogue- Include a conversation between Jorge and the new character. (Must have at least 4 lines of dialogue, properly punctuated.)
❏ Resolution & Conclusion- How does the story end?
❏ Use active voice. Avoid using too many being verbs like is, was, were, etc.
❏ 3 paragraphs minimum (1- 2 pages, double-spaced)
❏ Use proper spelling and conventions, including MLA Format.
Help Resources:
MLA Google Template
Portfolio Help Video
Punctuating Dialogue Help
Sensory Word List
Extra Credit:
To earn extra credit, include a drawing of the setting and/or the new character Jorge meets OR create a collage of pictures that represent the setting and/or the new character. (Google Images is a great place to find pictures to use in your collage.) Submit your drawing or collage to the drop box along with your narrative.
Narrative Writing Outline
A narrative is a spoken or written account of a series of connected events; in other words, a story.
Beginning
(In the climax of the story, Jorge is trapped in the secret passageway.)
Setting- Where does the secret passageway lead?
Describe the setting using sensory language.
...Jorge began walking away from his bedroom, away from his armchair and the comfort of his home. Each step took him farther into the dark and mysterious tunnel.
Begin Your Story Here…
Characterization- Create at least one character Jorge meets. Use sensory language in your description.
Middle
(In the falling action, what steps do Jorge & the new character take to overcome the conflict?)
Action- What do Jorge & the new character do? Use active voice.
Dialogue- Include a conversation between Jorge and the new character. (Must have at least 4 lines of dialogue & must use correct punctuation for dialogue.)
End
(In the resolution, how is the conflict resolved? You MUST have a resolution. No cliffhangers!)
Resolution- How is the conflict resolved? Does Jorge go back home?
Conclusion- How does the story end? What has Jorge learned from this experience?
Answers
GPT-4o mini
**Title: The Reader**
Jorge began walking away from his bedroom, away from his armchair and the comfort of his home. Each step took him farther into the dark and mysterious tunnel. The air turned cool and damp, carrying the scent of earth and ancient stones. As he pressed forward, the narrow passageway opened up into a vast cavern, illuminated by glimmering crystals protruding from the walls. Soft echoes filled the space, as if the stones themselves were whispering long-forgotten secrets. He marveled at the sight; a wide underground lake shimmered with a bluish luminescence that danced across the surface, revealing intricately carved figures submerged just beneath. The realization that he was venturing into uncharted territory sent a thrill through him.
His heart raced as he crossed the threshold of the cavern, drawn to the ethereal beauty surrounding him. Suddenly, a rustle caught his attention. From behind a massive stalagmite stepped a figure cloaked in dark, flowing robes that shimmered with faint silver, resembling the night sky. A hood obscured the figure's face, but Jorge could see a pair of piercing eyes shining through the shadows. “Who dares enter this sacred place?” the figure demanded, their voice echoing with authority yet softened by an undercurrent of curiosity.
“It’s me, Jorge,” he replied, striving to sound courageous despite the weight of uncertainty. “I found a secret passage in my house.”
“The passage has not been traversed in many years,” the figure said, stepping closer to reveal an expression of intrigue. The eyes glinted with wisdom as the figure continued, “You seek knowledge, do you not? This realm offers both treasures and trials.”
“I just wanted to explore,” Jorge admitted, excitement bubbling inside him. “What is this place?”
"This is the Nexus," the figure explained. "It holds the stories and memories of those who have come before you. But beware: not all knowledge is easy to carry. Are you willing to learn, Jorge?"
With a firm nod, Jorge replied, “Yes, I am.”
They walked together to the edge of the lake, where the figure gestured toward the water. “Here lies the truth of your journey. Each ripple reflects the choices you will make. What do you wish to uncover?”
“I want to know about my family’s past,” Jorge confessed, his voice steady now. “There are so many stories lost.”
“Then you shall,” the figure said, raising a hand toward the lake. The waters began to swirl, revealing images of his ancestors and their journey through struggles and victories. Jorge gasped, his heart swelling with pride and connection.
Through the shimmering reflections, Jorge learned not only of his family but of himself. He understood that every story was interwoven, a tapestry of hopes and dreams that shaped who he was. As the images faded, so did the initial fear of the unknown.
When the last vision disappeared, Jorge turned to the figure. “Thank you. I didn’t just discover where I come from; I found out what I am capable of.”
The figure nodded, as if pleased. “Knowledge is a double-edged sword, Jorge. Use it wisely. Now, it is time for you to return. The way back rests within your heart.”
With newfound confidence, Jorge retraced his steps toward the entrance of the passageway. As he stepped back into his home, the memories of the Nexus echoed in his mind, forever altering his perspective on life. The adventure had not only revealed his family's history but had sparked a fire within him to unearth more stories that would one day define his own legacy. Jorge smiled, knowing the journey was only just beginning.
Jorge began walking away from his bedroom, away from his armchair and the comfort of his home. Each step took him farther into the dark and mysterious tunnel. The air turned cool and damp, carrying the scent of earth and ancient stones. As he pressed forward, the narrow passageway opened up into a vast cavern, illuminated by glimmering crystals protruding from the walls. Soft echoes filled the space, as if the stones themselves were whispering long-forgotten secrets. He marveled at the sight; a wide underground lake shimmered with a bluish luminescence that danced across the surface, revealing intricately carved figures submerged just beneath. The realization that he was venturing into uncharted territory sent a thrill through him.
His heart raced as he crossed the threshold of the cavern, drawn to the ethereal beauty surrounding him. Suddenly, a rustle caught his attention. From behind a massive stalagmite stepped a figure cloaked in dark, flowing robes that shimmered with faint silver, resembling the night sky. A hood obscured the figure's face, but Jorge could see a pair of piercing eyes shining through the shadows. “Who dares enter this sacred place?” the figure demanded, their voice echoing with authority yet softened by an undercurrent of curiosity.
“It’s me, Jorge,” he replied, striving to sound courageous despite the weight of uncertainty. “I found a secret passage in my house.”
“The passage has not been traversed in many years,” the figure said, stepping closer to reveal an expression of intrigue. The eyes glinted with wisdom as the figure continued, “You seek knowledge, do you not? This realm offers both treasures and trials.”
“I just wanted to explore,” Jorge admitted, excitement bubbling inside him. “What is this place?”
"This is the Nexus," the figure explained. "It holds the stories and memories of those who have come before you. But beware: not all knowledge is easy to carry. Are you willing to learn, Jorge?"
With a firm nod, Jorge replied, “Yes, I am.”
They walked together to the edge of the lake, where the figure gestured toward the water. “Here lies the truth of your journey. Each ripple reflects the choices you will make. What do you wish to uncover?”
“I want to know about my family’s past,” Jorge confessed, his voice steady now. “There are so many stories lost.”
“Then you shall,” the figure said, raising a hand toward the lake. The waters began to swirl, revealing images of his ancestors and their journey through struggles and victories. Jorge gasped, his heart swelling with pride and connection.
Through the shimmering reflections, Jorge learned not only of his family but of himself. He understood that every story was interwoven, a tapestry of hopes and dreams that shaped who he was. As the images faded, so did the initial fear of the unknown.
When the last vision disappeared, Jorge turned to the figure. “Thank you. I didn’t just discover where I come from; I found out what I am capable of.”
The figure nodded, as if pleased. “Knowledge is a double-edged sword, Jorge. Use it wisely. Now, it is time for you to return. The way back rests within your heart.”
With newfound confidence, Jorge retraced his steps toward the entrance of the passageway. As he stepped back into his home, the memories of the Nexus echoed in his mind, forever altering his perspective on life. The adventure had not only revealed his family's history but had sparked a fire within him to unearth more stories that would one day define his own legacy. Jorge smiled, knowing the journey was only just beginning.