Question
What is the Most effective revision to make in sentence 13 A. People need time to relax and be themselves, separated from scrutiny and also separated from questions too. B. Separated from scrutiny, people need time to relax, be themselves, and not so many questions. C. People need time to relax and be themselves, separated from scrutiny and questions. D. Separated from scrutiny and time to relax and be themselves with not so many questions is what people need.
Answers
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To determine the most effective revision for sentence 13, we need to consider clarity, conciseness, and grammatical correctness.
Let's analyze the options:
A. This sentence is clear but slightly wordy with "also separated from questions too."
B. This option is somewhat convoluted. The phrase "not so many questions" feels awkward and doesn't flow well in the context.
C. This option is clear and concise, effectively capturing the intended meaning without unnecessary words.
D. This sentence is confusing and awkwardly structured. The phrasing "separated from scrutiny and time to relax and be themselves with not so many questions" is cumbersome.
Considering these factors, **option C** ("People need time to relax and be themselves, separated from scrutiny and questions.") is the most effective revision. It is clear, concise, and grammatically correct.
Let's analyze the options:
A. This sentence is clear but slightly wordy with "also separated from questions too."
B. This option is somewhat convoluted. The phrase "not so many questions" feels awkward and doesn't flow well in the context.
C. This option is clear and concise, effectively capturing the intended meaning without unnecessary words.
D. This sentence is confusing and awkwardly structured. The phrasing "separated from scrutiny and time to relax and be themselves with not so many questions" is cumbersome.
Considering these factors, **option C** ("People need time to relax and be themselves, separated from scrutiny and questions.") is the most effective revision. It is clear, concise, and grammatically correct.