Question

(1) We at the Plymouth Institute are only looking for the best people to work for our company. (2) We have a long history of having a long list of remarkable people on our staff who have gone on to bigger things and better things when they left Plymouth to go work elsewhere. (3) In fact, Plymouth can lay claim to 12 former employees who have served the U.S. Senate. (4) For over 40 years, Plymouth has maintained its quality and integrity by hiring only the best candidates that meet our high marks.
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What is the best way to write the underlined phrase in sentence 2?

We have a long history of having a long list of remarkable people on our staff who have gone on to bigger things and better things when they left Plymouth to go work elsewhere.
A.
who have gone on to accomplish bigger things and better things when they finally left Plymouth to go work elsewhere
B.
who have gone on to bigger and better opportunities upon leaving Plymouth
C.
who have done many bigger things and better things when they left Plymouth to go work elsewhere
D.
who have gone on to bigger and better things when they left Plymouth

Answer 1

The best way to write the underlined phrase in sentence 2 is:

B. who have gone on to bigger and better opportunities upon leaving Plymouth.

This option maintains clarity and conciseness, effectively conveying the idea without unnecessary repetition or wordiness.