Question
what is wrong with these two parts
1) his tone is triumphing
2) by telling his achievement(am i missing of between telling and his)
1) his tone is triumphing
2) by telling his achievement(am i missing of between telling and his)
Answers
drwls
1) "triumphant", an adjective, would be a better word than "triumphing". Tones do not engage in battle.
2) "of" is optional at that location
2) "of" is optional at that location
awesome
this is cheating