Question
Fix the sentence issues below: Be judicious in your use of hedge words.
Hedge words are words that show uncertainty. As a general rule, use no more than one hedge word per sentence. Your post contains 2 sentences with multiple hedge words (words: could, would, believe)
"I would also like to study more about Freud's concept of the id, superego, and ego as I think it could help you and me in medical training."
"The holistic way is interesting and I would like to know how it could benefit future patients."
Hedge words are words that show uncertainty. As a general rule, use no more than one hedge word per sentence. Your post contains 2 sentences with multiple hedge words (words: could, would, believe)
"I would also like to study more about Freud's concept of the id, superego, and ego as I think it could help you and me in medical training."
"The holistic way is interesting and I would like to know how it could benefit future patients."
Answers
GPT-4o mini
Here are the revised sentences that reduce the use of hedge words:
"I would like to study Freud's concept of the id, superego, and ego, as I believe it will help us in medical training."
"The holistic approach is interesting, and I want to understand how it can benefit future patients."
"I would like to study Freud's concept of the id, superego, and ego, as I believe it will help us in medical training."
"The holistic approach is interesting, and I want to understand how it can benefit future patients."