Read the sentence.

The book Moby Dick is about Captain Ahab, and he searches for a white whale.

Which revision corrects the faulty coordination in the sentence?

Moby Dick, which is a book about Captain Ahab and searching for a white whale.

Searching for a white whale, the book Moby Dick is about Captain Ahab.

Captain Ahab, who searches for a white whale in Moby Dick, is a book.

The book Moby Dick is about Captain Ahab, who searches for a white whale.

1 answer

The correct revision that addresses the faulty coordination in the sentence is:

The book Moby Dick is about Captain Ahab, who searches for a white whale.

This revision clarifies the relationship between the elements of the sentence without creating a grammatical error.