Question
9B Narrative Portfolio
Creative Writing: “The Reader”
Grading Rubric
Assignment Instructions:
Read the short passage “The Reader.”
Imagine how the story might continue after Jorge enters the secret passageway and write an ending to this story using the criteria listed below. (You may use the graphic organizer under these instructions for help, but you do NOT have to turn this in.) Your story must be TYPED in a Google document. (Do NOT copy & paste.) Use these instructions if you are not sure how to sign in to your school Google account. Per school policy, all writing assignments must now be completed in a Google Doc or in Google Slides. No other formats will be accepted. Any assignments submitted in a format other than a Google Docs or Google Slides link will temporarily receive a zero until the link is submitted.
It is ok to use AI to help generate ideas for your story like you did last semester, but the majority of the story should be written in your own words. Your narrative should be no more than 25% written by AI.
When you have finished writing, post the link to your story into the Unit 2 Lesson 6 Discussion as your Initial Post. The share settings for this link should be set to “Anyone with the link can VIEW” so your classmates can see what you have written. Use these instructions on how to complete a discussion assignment if you need help.
In the Unit 2 Lesson 6 Discussion, you will be receiving feedback about your story from your classmates. When you get to Unit 3 Lesson 1, view the feedback left for you in the Discussion threads and revise your story as needed.
When you have finished revising your story, run your final draft through an AI detector like GPT Zero or Quillbot. Your narrative should be no more than 25% written by AI. Take a screenshot of your AI report results that shows your writing AND the AI percentage. Copy & paste a screenshot of your AI report at the bottom of your Google doc.
In Unit 3 Lesson 2, submit the link to the final draft of your story to the assessment at the end of the lesson. Make sure the share settings are set to “Anyone with the link can EDIT.” Use these instructions if you need help with your share settings.
Requirements/Writer’s Checklist:
❏ Use 3rd Person Point of View - Remember, you are speaking as the narrator, so use 3rd person pronouns like “he” and “his.”
❏ Your story should be 1-2 pages (double-spaced) and should include the following:
❏ Setting- Use sensory language to describe where the passageway leads.
❏ Characterization- Create at least one character Jorge meets. Use sensory language & be descriptive!
❏ Dialogue- Include a conversation between Jorge and the new character. (Must have at least 4 lines of dialogue, properly punctuated.)
❏ Resolution & Conclusion- How does the story end?
❏ Use active voice. Avoid using too many being verbs like is, was, were, etc.
❏ 3 paragraphs minimum (1- 2 pages, double-spaced)
❏ Use proper spelling and conventions, including MLA Format.
Help Resources:
Portfolio Help Video
Punctuating Dialogue Help
Sensory Word List
Extra Credit:
To earn extra credit, include a drawing of the setting and/or the new character Jorge meets OR create a collage of pictures that represent the setting and/or the new character. (Google Images is a great place to find pictures to use in your collage.) Submit your drawing or collage to the drop box along with your narrative.
Narrative Writing Outline
A narrative is a spoken or written account of a series of connected events; in other words, a story.
Beginning
(In the climax of the story, Jorge is trapped in the secret passageway.)
Setting- Where does the secret passageway lead?
Describe the setting using sensory language.
...Jorge began walking away from his bedroom, away from his armchair and the comfort of his home. Each step took him farther into the dark and mysterious tunnel.
Begin Your Story Here…
Characterization- Create at least one character Jorge meets. Use sensory language in your description.
Middle
(In the falling action, what steps do Jorge & the new character take to overcome the conflict?)
Action- What do Jorge & the new character do? Use active voice.
Dialogue- Include a conversation between Jorge and the new character. (Must have at least 4 lines of dialogue & must use correct punctuation for dialogue.)
End
(In the resolution, how is the conflict resolved? You MUST have a resolution. No cliffhangers!)
Resolution- How is the conflict resolved? Does Jorge go back home?
Conclusion- How does the story end? What has Jorge learned from this experience?
Creative Writing: “The Reader”
Grading Rubric
Assignment Instructions:
Read the short passage “The Reader.”
Imagine how the story might continue after Jorge enters the secret passageway and write an ending to this story using the criteria listed below. (You may use the graphic organizer under these instructions for help, but you do NOT have to turn this in.) Your story must be TYPED in a Google document. (Do NOT copy & paste.) Use these instructions if you are not sure how to sign in to your school Google account. Per school policy, all writing assignments must now be completed in a Google Doc or in Google Slides. No other formats will be accepted. Any assignments submitted in a format other than a Google Docs or Google Slides link will temporarily receive a zero until the link is submitted.
It is ok to use AI to help generate ideas for your story like you did last semester, but the majority of the story should be written in your own words. Your narrative should be no more than 25% written by AI.
When you have finished writing, post the link to your story into the Unit 2 Lesson 6 Discussion as your Initial Post. The share settings for this link should be set to “Anyone with the link can VIEW” so your classmates can see what you have written. Use these instructions on how to complete a discussion assignment if you need help.
In the Unit 2 Lesson 6 Discussion, you will be receiving feedback about your story from your classmates. When you get to Unit 3 Lesson 1, view the feedback left for you in the Discussion threads and revise your story as needed.
When you have finished revising your story, run your final draft through an AI detector like GPT Zero or Quillbot. Your narrative should be no more than 25% written by AI. Take a screenshot of your AI report results that shows your writing AND the AI percentage. Copy & paste a screenshot of your AI report at the bottom of your Google doc.
In Unit 3 Lesson 2, submit the link to the final draft of your story to the assessment at the end of the lesson. Make sure the share settings are set to “Anyone with the link can EDIT.” Use these instructions if you need help with your share settings.
Requirements/Writer’s Checklist:
❏ Use 3rd Person Point of View - Remember, you are speaking as the narrator, so use 3rd person pronouns like “he” and “his.”
❏ Your story should be 1-2 pages (double-spaced) and should include the following:
❏ Setting- Use sensory language to describe where the passageway leads.
❏ Characterization- Create at least one character Jorge meets. Use sensory language & be descriptive!
❏ Dialogue- Include a conversation between Jorge and the new character. (Must have at least 4 lines of dialogue, properly punctuated.)
❏ Resolution & Conclusion- How does the story end?
❏ Use active voice. Avoid using too many being verbs like is, was, were, etc.
❏ 3 paragraphs minimum (1- 2 pages, double-spaced)
❏ Use proper spelling and conventions, including MLA Format.
Help Resources:
Portfolio Help Video
Punctuating Dialogue Help
Sensory Word List
Extra Credit:
To earn extra credit, include a drawing of the setting and/or the new character Jorge meets OR create a collage of pictures that represent the setting and/or the new character. (Google Images is a great place to find pictures to use in your collage.) Submit your drawing or collage to the drop box along with your narrative.
Narrative Writing Outline
A narrative is a spoken or written account of a series of connected events; in other words, a story.
Beginning
(In the climax of the story, Jorge is trapped in the secret passageway.)
Setting- Where does the secret passageway lead?
Describe the setting using sensory language.
...Jorge began walking away from his bedroom, away from his armchair and the comfort of his home. Each step took him farther into the dark and mysterious tunnel.
Begin Your Story Here…
Characterization- Create at least one character Jorge meets. Use sensory language in your description.
Middle
(In the falling action, what steps do Jorge & the new character take to overcome the conflict?)
Action- What do Jorge & the new character do? Use active voice.
Dialogue- Include a conversation between Jorge and the new character. (Must have at least 4 lines of dialogue & must use correct punctuation for dialogue.)
End
(In the resolution, how is the conflict resolved? You MUST have a resolution. No cliffhangers!)
Resolution- How is the conflict resolved? Does Jorge go back home?
Conclusion- How does the story end? What has Jorge learned from this experience?
Answers
GPT-4o mini
### Title: The Passageway
Jorge began walking away from his bedroom, away from his armchair and the comfort of his home. Each step took him farther into the dark and mysterious tunnel. As he ventured deeper, the air grew cooler, smell of damp earth mingling with the faint scent of aged wood. The walls were lined with uneven stones, slick with moisture that glinted in the faint light from his flashlight. Shadows danced along the length of the passageway, creating an unsettling atmosphere that both excited and terrified him.
After what felt like an eternity, Jorge stumbled upon a large chamber dimly illuminated by flickering torches affixed to the walls. The chamber was filled with strange relics—dust-covered shields, ancient armor, and a massive stone altar at its center. A sense of history enveloped him, each artifact whispering secrets of a time long gone. As he cautiously stepped forward, he heard a soft rustling behind him. Jorge’s heart raced as he turned to see a shadowy figure emerge from the darkness.
“Who goes there?” a woman’s voice echoed, firm yet curious. She stepped into the dim light, revealing herself to be a tall figure with flowing white hair and eyes that seemed to shimmer like silver in the flickering light. She was draped in a cloak that appeared to be woven from the night sky itself.
“Uh, I’m Jorge,” he stammered, taken aback by her sudden appearance. “I didn’t mean to intrude. I just found this passageway. What is this place?”
The woman studied him for a moment, her gaze piercing yet calm. “This is the Chamber of Echoes,” she replied. “I am Lysandra, the guardian of these secrets. Few venture this deep, and even fewer return.”
Jorge’s brow furrowed with curiosity. “What kind of secrets?”
“Secrets of the past and future,” Lysandra said, her fingers brushing against the artifacts. “But they are not to be taken lightly. They bear heavy consequences for those who wish to possess them.”
“What do you mean?” Jorge asked, his heart pounding as he contemplated the weight of her words.
“You must choose wisely, Jorge,” she warned, a serious tone creasing her brow. “The path you are on could change everything you know. Are you ready to confront what lies ahead?”
At that moment, Jorge felt a pull inside him, a yearning for something more than his mundane existence. “I want to understand,” he replied, voice steady despite the fear simmering within him. “I want to know what I can do to change my life for the better.”
Lysandra smiled softly, her demeanor shifting from intimidating to encouraging. “Then follow me. Together, we’ll explore the echoes of what was and what could be.”
They moved together through the chamber, Lysandra guiding him as they touched each artifact. With every item they explored, images and voices flooded Jorge’s mind—moments from his past, dreams for his future. He understood his choices shaped his journey; he realized he held the power to rewrite his own story.
As they finished exploring, Jorge turned to Lysandra, gratitude evident in his eyes. “Thank you for sharing this with me. I’ve learned so much.”
“Remember, Jorge,” she said, her tone gentle yet firm, “the true power lies not in the echoes of the past but in the choices you make moving forward.”
Taking a deep breath, Jorge nodded. He felt a sense of renewed purpose, an understanding of the weight of his decisions, and a desire to take control of his life. He turned back toward the passageway, ready to go home armed with newfound knowledge.
Emerging from the tunnel into the familiar comfort of his room, he felt different, lighter. Jorge knew this was just the beginning of a journey that extended beyond the walls of his house. With every choice he made, he would create his own story, unbound by fear and full of possibilities. As he closed the secret passageway behind him, a smile crept across his face—Jorge was ready to embrace the journey ahead.
**AI Detector Report:** (Attach the screenshot showing writing and AI percentage)
Jorge began walking away from his bedroom, away from his armchair and the comfort of his home. Each step took him farther into the dark and mysterious tunnel. As he ventured deeper, the air grew cooler, smell of damp earth mingling with the faint scent of aged wood. The walls were lined with uneven stones, slick with moisture that glinted in the faint light from his flashlight. Shadows danced along the length of the passageway, creating an unsettling atmosphere that both excited and terrified him.
After what felt like an eternity, Jorge stumbled upon a large chamber dimly illuminated by flickering torches affixed to the walls. The chamber was filled with strange relics—dust-covered shields, ancient armor, and a massive stone altar at its center. A sense of history enveloped him, each artifact whispering secrets of a time long gone. As he cautiously stepped forward, he heard a soft rustling behind him. Jorge’s heart raced as he turned to see a shadowy figure emerge from the darkness.
“Who goes there?” a woman’s voice echoed, firm yet curious. She stepped into the dim light, revealing herself to be a tall figure with flowing white hair and eyes that seemed to shimmer like silver in the flickering light. She was draped in a cloak that appeared to be woven from the night sky itself.
“Uh, I’m Jorge,” he stammered, taken aback by her sudden appearance. “I didn’t mean to intrude. I just found this passageway. What is this place?”
The woman studied him for a moment, her gaze piercing yet calm. “This is the Chamber of Echoes,” she replied. “I am Lysandra, the guardian of these secrets. Few venture this deep, and even fewer return.”
Jorge’s brow furrowed with curiosity. “What kind of secrets?”
“Secrets of the past and future,” Lysandra said, her fingers brushing against the artifacts. “But they are not to be taken lightly. They bear heavy consequences for those who wish to possess them.”
“What do you mean?” Jorge asked, his heart pounding as he contemplated the weight of her words.
“You must choose wisely, Jorge,” she warned, a serious tone creasing her brow. “The path you are on could change everything you know. Are you ready to confront what lies ahead?”
At that moment, Jorge felt a pull inside him, a yearning for something more than his mundane existence. “I want to understand,” he replied, voice steady despite the fear simmering within him. “I want to know what I can do to change my life for the better.”
Lysandra smiled softly, her demeanor shifting from intimidating to encouraging. “Then follow me. Together, we’ll explore the echoes of what was and what could be.”
They moved together through the chamber, Lysandra guiding him as they touched each artifact. With every item they explored, images and voices flooded Jorge’s mind—moments from his past, dreams for his future. He understood his choices shaped his journey; he realized he held the power to rewrite his own story.
As they finished exploring, Jorge turned to Lysandra, gratitude evident in his eyes. “Thank you for sharing this with me. I’ve learned so much.”
“Remember, Jorge,” she said, her tone gentle yet firm, “the true power lies not in the echoes of the past but in the choices you make moving forward.”
Taking a deep breath, Jorge nodded. He felt a sense of renewed purpose, an understanding of the weight of his decisions, and a desire to take control of his life. He turned back toward the passageway, ready to go home armed with newfound knowledge.
Emerging from the tunnel into the familiar comfort of his room, he felt different, lighter. Jorge knew this was just the beginning of a journey that extended beyond the walls of his house. With every choice he made, he would create his own story, unbound by fear and full of possibilities. As he closed the secret passageway behind him, a smile crept across his face—Jorge was ready to embrace the journey ahead.
**AI Detector Report:** (Attach the screenshot showing writing and AI percentage)