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This year I am a member of the 4H Jr. Leadership Council, TAB (Teen Advisory Board and the Library), Teens for Change, the Rocky Mountain Farmers Union (RMFU) Teen Leadership Camp, and their yearly Conference. I have also decided to go for the Congressional Medal of Honor which requires 100 service hours, 50 Personal Development hours, 50 Physical Fitness Hours, and a two-day one-night learning excursion that I plan. At the RMFU camp, I was elected to be the president where I led the group store and decided where the proceeds were donated. In Teens for Change, I planned a Party in the Park event to unite local teens in the area. In the 4H Jr. Leadership Council, I was elected Parliamentarian, which is great being the youngest in the group. In all of my groups, I try to be a leader even when I am often the youngest.
So far this semester, I have completed indirect service hours planning events and meetings with TAB (Teen Advisory Board), TFC (Teens for Change), RMFU (Rocky Mountain Farmers Union), and the 4H Jr. Leadership Council. I have spent direct service hours working on projects such as Wreaths Across America, Operation Christmas Child, 4H Expos, RMFU Presenting Arms, and Live Auction. I learned that the time I spend helping others is time worth living because we are all in this together. I also learned that more hands equals less work. I find that when it comes to volunteering my time, I prefer civic duty organizations over one-day events. Overall, joining NJHS has allowed me to expand my leadership and volunteer skills and has driven me to look into my community to see where my time is needed.
The advice I would give to new members of NJHS when volunteering is to go with the flow because you never know what’s going to happen. Honesty, Integrity, and reliability are very important when volunteering. There are people relying on you to show up and work hard when you tell them you will be there to volunteer. Volunteering is fundamental in life because serving others is ultimately serving ourselves.
The organizations I am involved with are local and go with my way of life. These organizations provide opportunities for volunteering and planning events. Outside these organizations, I find service hours in my community. I have done many small service projects such as cleaning up our local cemetery to sitting at a booth talking to people about our Health Department services. I don’t worry about finding service hours because I know I can stop by our local Rec. and they will put me to work.

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This year, I am a member of the 4-H Jr. Leadership Council, the Teen Advisory Board (TAB) at the library, Teens for Change, and the Rocky Mountain Farmers Union (RMFU) Teen Leadership Camp, as well as their yearly conference. I have also decided to pursue the Congressional Medal of Honor, which requires 100 service hours, 50 personal development hours, 50 physical fitness hours, and a two-day, one-night learning excursion that I plan to coordinate. At the RMFU camp, I was elected president, where I led the group store and decided how the proceeds would be donated. In Teens for Change, I planned a "Party in the Park" event to unite local teens in the area. In the 4-H Jr. Leadership Council, I was elected parliamentarian, which is significant considering I am the youngest member of the group. In all of my groups, I strive to be a leader, even when I am often the youngest participant.

So far this semester, I have completed indirect service hours by planning events and meetings with TAB, TFC, RMFU, and the 4-H Jr. Leadership Council. I have devoted direct service hours to projects such as Wreaths Across America, Operation Christmas Child, 4-H Expos, RMFU Presenting Arms, and a live auction. I have learned that the time I spend helping others is time well spent because we are all in this together. I have also realized that more hands mean less work. When it comes to volunteering my time, I prefer civic duty organizations over one-day events. Overall, joining NJHS has allowed me to expand my leadership and volunteer skills and has motivated me to explore my community to see where my time is needed.

The advice I would give to new NJHS members regarding volunteering is to go with the flow because you never know what will happen. Honesty, integrity, and reliability are crucial when volunteering. There are people relying on you to show up and work hard when you commit to volunteering. Volunteering is fundamental in life because serving others ultimately serves ourselves.

The organizations I am involved with are local and align with my way of life. These organizations provide opportunities for volunteering and planning events. Outside of these organizations, I find service hours within my community. I have completed many small service projects, such as cleaning up our local cemetery and sitting at a booth to talk to people about our Health Department services. I don’t worry about finding service hours because I know I can stop by our local Recreation Center, and they will put me to work.

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