The best way to rewrite the underlined part of the sentence is:
C. pivoting on her heel to walk back
This option maintains the flow of the sentence and provides a smoother transition.
The runway model in the floor-length gown strutted down the catwalk, struck a pose at the end, and, with a wink for the photographers, pivoted on her heel to walk back.
What is the best way to write the underlined part of the sentence?
A.
she also pivoted on her heel to walk back
B.
Leave as is
C.
pivoting on her heel to walk back
D.
to pivot on her heel to walk back
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