Question
help me write this short essay in a proper english “ i’ve cried for months for months kabelo i’ve dumped you when things were bad but on that i’ve never went out to cheat nor disrespect you. sure i talked to theron and i told him that i’m single because things we really bad on my sides and you were not there with me and yes i admit it was wrong and i’m sorry. sure i had a crush on keith i’m a human being but i’ve never dated him. sure i talked to martin he wanted us to date i’ve never allowed because the age gap doesn’t allow me to do such. sure we talked me and mash we talked on calls and to show that i’m respect you i even asked you to befriend him as he asked, i’ve got no problem with mash but you do. i got no intentions for mash. i’ve been so submissive, there are things i’ve made for you which i can’t do them for my self and i also can’t name them. i’ve loved you so bad but unfortunately you can’t realise it over a stupid fight. look yea i loved paballo to a point where i can’t see that i’m being played, i’ve told you such because i was hurt now you to come point me with it and guess what the moment you’ve done that all the love i had for you vanished without any trace. so on that 1000 that you’ve gave me i took out the 200 to do my hair i then took out 200 to pay rent. i’ll replace it when i’m having it and give it back to you. the shirts that i gave you and bought for you and my short i did with love, so please help me don’t bring them to here at home instead burn them if you no longer need them please.”
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GPT-4o mini
Here's a revised version of your essay, with improved clarity and structure:
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Dear Kabelo,
I have shed tears for months over our relationship. I want you to know that, despite the difficulties we faced, I never cheated on you or disrespected you. There were times when I felt it was best to end things between us, but even during those moments, my intentions were always sincere.
I did talk to Theron and mentioned that I was single, but I was facing considerable challenges on my end, and it felt like you were not there to support me. I acknowledge that this may have been inappropriate, and for that, I sincerely apologize. I also had a fleeting crush on Keith; I am human, after all. However, I want to make it clear that I never pursued a relationship with him. I had conversations with Martin, who expressed interest in dating, but I didn’t allow it to progress due to our age difference.
As for Mash, we did have conversations over the phone, but to show my respect for you, I even asked to befriend him, as he requested. I have no issues with Mash, but it’s clear that there is tension between you and him. I want to reassure you that I have no romantic intentions for Mash.
Throughout our relationship, I have made many sacrifices for you, often putting your needs above my own. I loved you deeply, but it pains me to think that you might not recognize that love due to a trivial argument.
I once loved Paballo in a way that blinded me to the reality of the situation, and I shared those feelings with you because I was hurting. When you brought it up to hurt me, it extinguished the love I had for you completely.
Regarding the money you gave me, I took out 200 to do my hair and another 200 for rent. I assure you, I will return the 200 when I am able. The shirts and other items I gifted you were given with love, and if you no longer need them, I kindly ask that you do not bring them back home. Instead, please consider burning them.
Best regards,
[Your Name]
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Dear Kabelo,
I have shed tears for months over our relationship. I want you to know that, despite the difficulties we faced, I never cheated on you or disrespected you. There were times when I felt it was best to end things between us, but even during those moments, my intentions were always sincere.
I did talk to Theron and mentioned that I was single, but I was facing considerable challenges on my end, and it felt like you were not there to support me. I acknowledge that this may have been inappropriate, and for that, I sincerely apologize. I also had a fleeting crush on Keith; I am human, after all. However, I want to make it clear that I never pursued a relationship with him. I had conversations with Martin, who expressed interest in dating, but I didn’t allow it to progress due to our age difference.
As for Mash, we did have conversations over the phone, but to show my respect for you, I even asked to befriend him, as he requested. I have no issues with Mash, but it’s clear that there is tension between you and him. I want to reassure you that I have no romantic intentions for Mash.
Throughout our relationship, I have made many sacrifices for you, often putting your needs above my own. I loved you deeply, but it pains me to think that you might not recognize that love due to a trivial argument.
I once loved Paballo in a way that blinded me to the reality of the situation, and I shared those feelings with you because I was hurting. When you brought it up to hurt me, it extinguished the love I had for you completely.
Regarding the money you gave me, I took out 200 to do my hair and another 200 for rent. I assure you, I will return the 200 when I am able. The shirts and other items I gifted you were given with love, and if you no longer need them, I kindly ask that you do not bring them back home. Instead, please consider burning them.
Best regards,
[Your Name]