Question

Does this make sense?
If not fix it please.
If so add on to make it better.
Thank-You
Intro:
You can fool some of the people all of the time, and all of the people some of the time, but you can not fool all of the people all of the time. Therefore, the only reason for time is so that everything doesn't happen at once. “And thus the whirligig of time brings in his revenges.” With time, the truth will come out. So, is this true?

P.S Realting to Twelfth Night



The first thing I suggest is that you give credit for the quotation that is your first sentence. It needs to be in quotation marks and then name Abraham Lincoln as the originator of that statement. http://www.quoteland.com/search.asp?query=you+can+fool+some+of+the+people

Also you need to delete that comma after "So" in your last sentence (question).

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Answer 1

yes